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Featured listList of HolbyBlue episodes is a featured list, which means it has been identified as one of the best lists produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
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March 1, 2018Featured list candidatePromoted

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@Soaper1234 and JuneGloom07: I have rewritten this article in the hopes that we can get it promoted to a Featured List. However, I wanted to ping you both as I am unhappy with the lead section I have written. It has taken me quite a while to even compose a lead section for this article, as I am quite unsure as to what a List of Episodes article should include in its lead section. Would either of you two be able to read the lead section and let me know what you think of it so far, and any improvements either of you feel could be made? Hopefully the rewritten version is an improvement from what was there originally. ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 17:37, 29 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@ElectrodeandtheAnode: I think the whole article looks good. You'd do well to take it WP:FLC. The lead looks good, like you mentioned it is tricky to write a lead. The only thing I can think of adding is possibly a short sentence or two about the awards and nominations HolbyBlue has. Well done on this however, and I wish you the best. Soaper1234 - talk 18:41, 29 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Possibly add a photo for the lead too? I'm not sure if you would be able to find any free media, but failing that, what about a DVD cover or something along those lines? Soaper1234 - talk 18:48, 29 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@Soaper1234: Thank you for your suggestion! I have added the nominations paragraph in. I will be honest, I have absolutely no idea about adding images to Wikipedia! I would have liked to add a photo to the article, even if it was just the title card, but I'm afraid I have no idea how to add a free media image. If you wished to do so please feel free to add an image, I would happily give you credit. Otherwise, thank you for your suggestion, and I will take it to FLC in the next two days. ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 18:20, 1 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@ElectrodeandtheAnode: Looks good - I'd maybe just merge the third and fourth as they both look too short on their own? I've found an image of the series one DVD that I don't mind uploading for you. Don't worry about credit or anything as I'm only adding a photo! Good luck! Soaper1234 - talk 18:33, 1 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Soaper1234: Paragraphs merged! If you wouldn't mind uploading the image, that would be fantastic! Thank you very much, fingers crossed for hopefully the first FL of 2018! ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 18:52, 1 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@ElectrodeandtheAnode: Image uploaded, hope it's ok! All the best, looking forward to seeing the progress! Soaper1234 - talk 19:08, 1 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Soaper1234: That's wonderful, thank you so much for that! I will put the article up for nomination either tonight or tomorrow! ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 19:11, 1 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@ElectrodeandtheAnode: No worries - all the best of luck! Soaper1234 - talk 19:16, 1 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@ElectrodeandtheAnode and Soaper1234: Sorry for the late reply. I too hate writing leads, but I think you've done a good job. Good luck at FLC! - JuneGloom07 Talk 00:28, 2 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@JuneGloom07: It's no problem, JuneGloom07, and thank you! ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 12:15, 2 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]