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Perhaps the entire article needs to be rewritten, based on the fact that it's still highly promotional and badly referenced, especially the career section needs to be cut down immensely. Might do so myself once I have the time. Thoughts? Dellwegg (talk) 09:19, 10 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, I agree. It reads in several sections like a puff piece drafted by a PR firm. I've made a few edits this evening and encourage you (and any others) to take a crack or two at it as well. JohnInDC (talk) 01:37, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
A lot of the claims put forth by this article are supported only by generic references, e.g., "worked this thus-and-such actor on speech patterns for X movie" shows only a link to the film at IMDB (itself not really an RS in the first place). Some other claims are directly supported by reliable third party sources. Given the high degree of COI / SPA editing that this article has labored under over the years and the promotional tone that permeates it, I've removed material from the article whose sources are either generic, based on the subject's autobiographical material, or deadlinks. JohnInDC (talk) 12:34, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]