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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 22:24, 19 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Haven't done one of your articles for a good amount of time, here comes a review! --K. Peake 22:24, 19 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks for taking this on, good to hear from you again. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:23, 20 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
    • Thanks!
  • Keep the composition being No. 80 here but write out and source in the body, as refs are discouraged in the lead
    • Done.
  • "The Epistle is a" → "It is a" and merge this with the above para because you don't have enough content for two
    • Done.
  • Add a sentence about the composition's reception to the lead
    • Added.
  • Remove [2] from the lead because there is no direct quote here
    • Done.

Context

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  • First para looks good!
    • Thanks.
  • "during the eighteenth century." → "during the 18th century." per MOS:NUM
    • Done.

Song

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Music and verse form

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  • Audio sample looks good!
    • Noted.
  • Merge the first para with the second per the short length
    • Done.
  • Pipe rhyming pattern to Rhyme scheme
    • Done.
  • Pipe 6
    8
    time to Time signature
    • Done.

Lyrics

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  • Nicolas BoileauNicolas Boileau-Despréaux on the img text
    • Done.
  • Introduce who Nicolas Boileau-Despréaux is in prose
    • Done.
  • "Further, a horse" → "Furthermore, a horse"
    • Done.
  • "a mention of Ulla." → "a mention of Ulla Winblad." per Wiki policy on names
    • Done.
  • "But Bellman displays a" → "However, Bellman displays a"
  • Done.

Reception and legacy

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  • Img looks good!
    • Thanks.
  • "Bellman's biographer, Paul Britten Austin, describes" → "Bellman's biographer Paul Britten Austin describes"
    • Done; both are correct.
  • "like a Constable painting," → "like a John Constable painting,"
    • Done.
  • "However he finds" → "However, he finds"
    • Done.
  • "crowing outside, and the bell" is the form of English used really the correct one to have a comma before and?
    • Yes.
  • "with Epistles 71, "Ulla! min Ulla!", and" → "with Epistles 71 and" because 71 has already been introduced
    • Done.
  • "and Ulla's way of" → "and Ulla Winblad's way of"
    • Done.
  • Pipe classical to Classical music
    • Done.

References

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  • Copyvio score looks superb at 10.7%!!!
    • Noted.
  • Add the language parameter to ref 1
    • Done.
  • Pipe The Bellman Society to Bellman Society on ref 4 per MOS:LINK2SECT
    • Done.
  • Should Eva Toller really be listed as an author for ref 23 when that is on her website?
    • Yes, she could be hosting guest authors there too.

Sources

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  • Good
    • Noted.

Final comments and verdict

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