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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 22:24, 19 January 2022 (UTC)
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Haven't done one of your articles for a good amount of time, here comes a review! --K. Peake 22:24, 19 January 2022 (UTC)
- Many thanks for taking this on, good to hear from you again. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:23, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Infobox looks good!
- Thanks!
- Keep the composition being No. 80 here but write out and source in the body, as refs are discouraged in the lead
- Done.
- "The Epistle is a" → "It is a" and merge this with the above para because you don't have enough content for two
- Done.
- Add a sentence about the composition's reception to the lead
- Added.
- Remove [2] from the lead because there is no direct quote here
- Done.
Context
[edit]- First para looks good!
- Thanks.
- "during the eighteenth century." → "during the 18th century." per MOS:NUM
- Done.
Song
[edit]Music and verse form
[edit]- Audio sample looks good!
- Noted.
- Merge the first para with the second per the short length
- Done.
- Pipe rhyming pattern to Rhyme scheme
- Done.
- Pipe 6
8 time to Time signature- Done.
Lyrics
[edit]- Nicolas Boileau → Nicolas Boileau-Despréaux on the img text
- Done.
- Introduce who Nicolas Boileau-Despréaux is in prose
- Done.
- "Further, a horse" → "Furthermore, a horse"
- Done.
- "a mention of Ulla." → "a mention of Ulla Winblad." per Wiki policy on names
- Done.
- "But Bellman displays a" → "However, Bellman displays a"
- Done.
Reception and legacy
[edit]- Img looks good!
- Thanks.
- "Bellman's biographer, Paul Britten Austin, describes" → "Bellman's biographer Paul Britten Austin describes"
- Done; both are correct.
- "like a Constable painting," → "like a John Constable painting,"
- Done.
- "However he finds" → "However, he finds"
- Done.
"crowing outside, and the bell" is the form of English used really the correct one to have a comma before and?Yes.
- "with Epistles 71, "Ulla! min Ulla!", and" → "with Epistles 71 and" because 71 has already been introduced
- Done.
- "and Ulla's way of" → "and Ulla Winblad's way of"
- Done.
- Pipe classical to Classical music
- Done.
References
[edit]- Copyvio score looks superb at 10.7%!!!
- Noted.
- Add the language parameter to ref 1
- Done.
- Pipe The Bellman Society to Bellman Society on ref 4 per MOS:LINK2SECT
- Done.
Should Eva Toller really be listed as an author for ref 23 when that is on her website?Yes, she could be hosting guest authors there too.
Sources
[edit]- Pipe Simon and Schuster to Simon & Schuster
- Done.
External links
[edit]- Good
- Noted.
Final comments and verdict
[edit]- On hold until everything is fixed; coincidentally, you expressed gratitude around the same time I started actually reviewing! --K. Peake 09:20, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
- Many thanks. I think I've fixed everything to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:42, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
- Chiswick Chap All good, apart from where you forgot to change the pipes for rhyming pattern and 6
8. --K. Peake 09:46, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
- I've done those for you. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:48, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass now; I am very pleased with such a quick response! --K. Peake 09:55, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
- Chiswick Chap All good, apart from where you forgot to change the pipes for rhyming pattern and 6