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Good articleLiksom en Herdinna, högtids klädd has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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January 20, 2022Good article nomineeListed

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 22:24, 19 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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Haven't done one of your articles for a good amount of time, here comes a review! --K. Peake 22:24, 19 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks for taking this on, good to hear from you again. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:23, 20 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
    • Thanks!
  • Keep the composition being No. 80 here but write out and source in the body, as refs are discouraged in the lead
    • Done.
  • "The Epistle is a" → "It is a" and merge this with the above para because you don't have enough content for two
    • Done.
  • Add a sentence about the composition's reception to the lead
    • Added.
  • Remove [2] from the lead because there is no direct quote here
    • Done.

Context

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  • First para looks good!
    • Thanks.
  • "during the eighteenth century." → "during the 18th century." per MOS:NUM
    • Done.

Song

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Music and verse form

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  • Audio sample looks good!
    • Noted.
  • Merge the first para with the second per the short length
    • Done.
  • Pipe rhyming pattern to Rhyme scheme
    • Done.
  • Pipe 6
    8     time to Time signature
    • Done.

Lyrics

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  • Nicolas Boileau → Nicolas Boileau-Despréaux on the img text
    • Done.
  • Introduce who Nicolas Boileau-Despréaux is in prose
    • Done.
  • "Further, a horse" → "Furthermore, a horse"
    • Done.
  • "a mention of Ulla." → "a mention of Ulla Winblad." per Wiki policy on names
    • Done.
  • "But Bellman displays a" → "However, Bellman displays a"
  • Done.

Reception and legacy

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  • Img looks good!
    • Thanks.
  • "Bellman's biographer, Paul Britten Austin, describes" → "Bellman's biographer Paul Britten Austin describes"
    • Done; both are correct.
  • "like a Constable painting," → "like a John Constable painting,"
    • Done.
  • "However he finds" → "However, he finds"
    • Done.
  • "crowing outside, and the bell" is the form of English used really the correct one to have a comma before and?
    • Yes.
  • "with Epistles 71, "Ulla! min Ulla!", and" → "with Epistles 71 and" because 71 has already been introduced
    • Done.
  • "and Ulla's way of" → "and Ulla Winblad's way of"
    • Done.
  • Pipe classical to Classical music
    • Done.

References

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  • Copyvio score looks superb at 10.7%!!!
    • Noted.
  • Add the language parameter to ref 1
    • Done.
  • Pipe The Bellman Society to Bellman Society on ref 4 per MOS:LINK2SECT
    • Done.
  • Should Eva Toller really be listed as an author for ref 23 when that is on her website?
    • Yes, she could be hosting guest authors there too.

Sources

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  • Good
    • Noted.

Final comments and verdict

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