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Reviewer: Auntieruth55 (talk · contribs) 21:31, 2 March 2017 (UTC)
- I'll get to this over the weekend. auntieruth (talk) 21:31, 2 March 2017 (UTC)
- First section
- second sentence is hinky
- Fixed after looking up "hinky" in the Wiktionary. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
- link second lieutenant
- Mitchell Field, New York, (missing comma after NY)
- Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
- WWII
- Dab
- Disambiguated . Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
- On 14 May 1943 comma
- Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
- The B-24, carrying incendiaries, came under particularly heavy attack from German fighters, as they were unable to stay close enough the B-17s to be protected by their gunfire, and had to open up their own formation to attack; five of the eight aircraft shot down were B-24s. confusing to an air fighting noob
- the attack on the Ploesti oil fields in Romania....the attack on the Romanian Ploesti oil fields is possibly more readable
- Andy Rooney knew he was a general before he was a general?
- Yes, but he didn't like hanging around the bomber outfits, because it was too depressing. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
- Postwar
- capitalize air
- promotion to major general?
- Nice! Let me know when you get to this. auntieruth (talk) 23:03, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- nicely done. interesting and concise. auntieruth (talk) 16:58, 11 March 2017 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: