Talk:Layla El/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: After reading this article, I think it is safe to say that the article has passed the Good article criteria.

The Lead section generalises all the activities that she does in her career, and all of them have been split up into different sections providing additional details (Even the personal life section as well!), with all pieces of evidence supported by accurate and professionally written sources that relate to the subject. On the Stability aspect there doesn't appear to be any mistakes here. All the sentences are written neutrally providing no weasel words or original research. There's also no peacock terms, which doesn't promote the subject in any way.

The only improvement I have suggested is to create a section for modelling (As that paragraph is longer than that of her dancing career), but that can easily be sorted out. Other than that, this BLP deserves a pass. Minima c (talk) 07:14, 11 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Separated out modelling section. Thanks for thereview. ♥Nici♥Vampire♥Heart♥ 07:25, 11 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]