Talk:Larry Hefner/GA1

GA Review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 00:14, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 19:54, 20 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 19:54, 20 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

He was North Mecklenberg's second NFL alumni and was a two-way player for the school, being a linebacker on defense while a guard. -> adding "while on offense" would make this sentence make sense a bit more.
- Done.
best linebackers in the county in the either say "his county" or state which county it is.
- Changed to "his county"
he worked as a pit crew member for racers. can you clarify what type of "racers"? NASCAR? Semi-pro?
- Clarified as NASCAR.
Ref spot check: #5, 7, 12, 16, 18, 22

Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:27, 23 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Gonzo fan2007: BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:38, 23 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Looks good, passing. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 00:14, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.