Talk:Larry Hefner
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 19:54, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 19:54, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
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[edit]He was North Mecklenberg's second NFL alumni and was a two-way player for the school, being a linebacker on defense while a guard.
-> adding "while on offense" would make this sentence make sense a bit more.- Done.
best linebackers in the county in the
either say "his county" or state which county it is.- Changed to "his county"
he worked as a pit crew member for racers.
can you clarify what type of "racers"? NASCAR? Semi-pro?- Clarified as NASCAR.
- Ref spot check: #5, 7, 12, 16, 18, 22
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:27, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
- @Gonzo fan2007: BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:38, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
- Looks good, passing. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 00:14, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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