Talk:La fedeltà premiata

"Music" section

Are the contents of this section copied out directly from the two sources? Currently it reads a bit POV-y. Could maybe the facts be seperated from the opinions, and the latter be directly attributed in the text to the sources? almost-instinct 11:30, 4 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I think I probably contributed most of this section. There are at least three sources for it all, and if it would help at all, I can try to find time to assign a reference to each (para)phrase within the section. If this would help to solve the problem do let me know. (The "opinions" are of course those of the writers and editors of the respective 'phrases', not mine. It was already getting 'bottom-heavy' with references anyway, so I suspect that given that it is all fairly innocuous I decided to go steady on footnotes.) Cg2p0B0u8m (talk) 16:34, 5 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I've reordered the material so that opinions/evaluations drawn from the sources are kept seperate from the straight reportage of the facts. I'm hoping that I haven't got the wrong end of the stick in the process! I wasn't sure to which source the opening sentence is attributed, so I've just left a cn tag there to be replaces with the correct cite. almost-instinct 15:24, 6 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]