Talk:La Dama Enmascarada

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Review: April 29, 2020. (Reviewed version).

A fact from La Dama Enmascarada appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 6 April 2020 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that La Dama Enmascarada became the first female professional wrestler in Mexico to be forced to unmask when she lost a Lucha de Apuestas match to Irma González in 1958?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2020/April. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/La Dama Enmascarada and Irma González.

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:30, 31 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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... that in 1958, professional La Dama Enmascarada was the first female forced to unmask when she lost a Lucha de Apuestas match to Irma González? Enciclopedia staff (September 2007). "Enciclopedia de las Mascaras" [The Eyclopedia of Masks]. La Dama Enmascarada (in Spanish). Mexico. p. 4. Tomo II.

Reviewed: Nikolai Moskvitelev, Green Arrow (Arrow episode)
Comment: Two hooks, two QPQ. Using date of second article creation (González)

Created by MPJ-DK (talk). Self-nominated at 05:31, 25 February 2020 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall:

– John M Wolfson (talk • contribs) 00:50, 31 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:La Dama Enmascarada/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 09:51, 25 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Am reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 09:51, 25 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Lead

"Caballero was a relative of professional wrestler Irma González as well as González's daughter Irma Aguilar although it is unclear exactly how they were related." - seems odd. In the infobox, it states that she is niece to Irma González. Please clarify this
"She started out as a masked wrestler," - began her career
"but lost her mask in 1958 to Irma González, but would later wrestle under the mask again." - repetition of the word "but"

Biography

"Caballero was born into a circus family" - she
Wikilink boxing promoters to Promoter (entertainment)

Professional wrestling career

"including Magdalena Caballero. Caballero would work" Try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this.
"Her reign lasted less than a year as Irma González won the championship later that year." - in 1955.
"she would at times wrestle under her real name and at other times still use the "La Dama Enmascarada" name," - and sometimes the
"After the mask loss" - the loss of her mask,
"despite not being masked anymore." - no longer being masked.
"Due to very few records of wrestling from that period of time" - from that time period
"it's uncertain who defeated La Dama" - it is uncertain as to who
"On January 22, 1961, La Dama Enmascarada evened the score with Irma González" - the text in bold is not particularly encyclopedic
"as she teamed up with Chabela Romero to take on the team of Irma González and Toña la Tapatía" - repetition of "team"
"Empresa Mexicana de Lucha Libre (EMLL) show in Guadalajara." - the acroynms are not needed since they are not repeated elsewhere

Personal life

"Caballero and husband Andrés Ramos had a total of six children together before their divorce in the 1950s" - the text in bold is not needed
"Magdalena Caballero died on March 11, 2006," - what did she die from? Do we know?

References

It looks like that Reference 1 is missing the page number that the story can be found on

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 10:59, 25 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

MWright96 thank you for your review, I will look over the comments and made the appropriate updates. Note, I am going to be quite busy over the weeekend so I may not get to the feedback for a day or two. MPJ-DK (talk) 16:10, 25 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- MWright96 sorry it took me a bit, I had to e-mail someone who could actually see the archives of the newspaper since the article they sent me way back did not include the page number. I got it all that I believe I've addressed all issues. MPJ-DK (talk) 01:31, 29 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - @MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class; I've made one small change to the prose. MWright96 (talk) 08:08, 29 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]