Talk:Ktheju tokës/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 19:01, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

Infobox

• Needs alt.
• No composition
• Sokol Marsi → not mentioned elsewhere, no source on the body of the article

 Done

Lead

• is a song by Albanian singer Jonida Maliqi. → song by Albanian singer Jonida Maliqi.

I think the current version is good ..--Lorik17 (talk) 20:45, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

Remove recorded. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:55, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

• produced by Enis Mullaj and Sokol Marsi. → see below
• missing who composed the track
• it lyrically makes reference to the theme of migration, → Lyrically addresses the theme of migration,
• where it has since accumulated a total of 2.5 million views as of 2020. → not relevant
• Should have a reference to the critical reception of the song

 Done

Background and composition

• produced by Enis Mullaj → not on given source
• and remastered in the Svenska → and remastered at Svenska

 Done

Critical reception

• several reviews from individual critics → name two or three

 Done

Promotion

• Retitle the section Music Video and promotion

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 20:53, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

• Move the section below

@MarioSoulTruthFan: You mean to move it under the "At Eurovision" section?--Lorik17 (talk) 15:45, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

The secton should be below the eurovision one. Not under its umbrella. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:52, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

I don't feel the position of this section is such a big issue but ok; i guess its better to stay above the Eurovision section, its like a chronological order.--Lorik17 (talk) 16:00, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

• where as of 2020 it has since amassed a total of 2.5 million views → remove, not notable

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 20:43, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

• Maliqi embarked on a small tour → three shows are not a tour

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 20:43, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

Festivali i Këngës

• Fine

Tel Aviv

• According to the "rules, → According to the rules, "

 Done

Personnel

• Two collums

 Done

Track listing

• Fine

Release history

• Need to add the Digital downloads with the karaoke vesion

Its within the source "38"--Lorik17 (talk) 21:20, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

Add here that release. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:54, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

 Done

References

• Don't SHOUT in references (see refs: 12, 17, 22...)

 Not doneThere are others. 2, 11, 29 and 34. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:06, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: could you explain, i don't understand what you mean with "shout in references"--Lorik17 (talk) 17:35, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

@Iaof2017: Everthything is in capital letters. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:57, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan:  Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:40, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

• Either wikilink only once each source or wikilink everything, I prefer the former.

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 15:20, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

• Wiwiblogs are missing author and dates, same for eurovision sites

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 15:20, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

• Metro is work

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 20:43, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

Overall

• You can now address the issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:33, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: I think most of the issues were fixed now.--Lorik17 (talk) 15:39, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

@Iaof2017: See lead, promotion and references, you missed a couple. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:43, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

@Iaof2017: made a minor fix, please take a look. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:18, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: Thank you; I think everything is now ok?--Lorik17 (talk) 14:26, 17 April 2020 (UTC)