Talk:Kraljevo massacre/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 01:59, 2 February 2017 (UTC)

Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 01:59, 2 February 2017 (UTC)

Whenever you're ready, Krishna. 23 editor (talk) 16:48, 15 February 2017 (UTC)

• Lead;
  • they were sprayed with heavy machine guns; "sprayed" is a bit awkward, use a better a word
  • Mention the dates of act i.e. 15–20 October 1941 in the lead
  • italicize Wehrmacht, wherever in the article
• Section 1;
  • From that time then
  • Yugoslavia was almost completely surrounded
  • Yugoslavia was quickly overwhelmed
• Section 2;
  • prefix the rank of Milan Nedić
• Section 3; all good
• Section 4; all good
• 9.9% confidence, violation unlikely

Sorry, almost missed this one. Anyways, excellent work. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 02:12, 17 February 2017 (UTC)

All done, Krishna. Thanks for the review. 23 editor (talk) 19:22, 17 February 2017 (UTC)

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 01:46, 18 February 2017 (UTC)