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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 15:40, 25 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]


I’ll do this one Courcelles (talk) 15:40, 25 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

You could mention the performances in the lead, at least the best one.

  • Flagbearer needs to be cited and mentioned in prose in the background, not just the infobox. Closing flagbearer too, if you can find it.
  • "Kiribati's first Games was in 2004.[1] Kiribati had interest in Olympic participation in the 1980s, and the country later formed their National Olympic Committee (NOC) in 2002, which was recognized by the International Olympic Committee (IOC) in 2003.[2]:311" These sentences seem to flow better in reverse order to me.
  • "He did not run in the 200 meter competition for undisclosed reasons." Source?
  • !00 metre and 200 meter should be plural, I think.
    • For athletics, at least in American English (no idea on other variations), it is singular. Kees08 (Talk)
  • What's sourcing the actual weights he lifted?

Otherwise looks good. Courcelles (talk) 18:00, 27 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]