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Nominator: BennyOnTheLoose (talk · contribs) 16:55, 23 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 18:11, 29 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]


  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a. (reference section):
    b. (citations to reliable sources):
    c. (OR):
    d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a. (major aspects):
    b. (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
    b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

I will review this today! --K. Peake 18:11, 29 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • Change the opening sentence's introduction to the song on the album to reading as "Bob Dylan, released as the ninth track on his thirty-ninth studio album, Rough and Rowdy Ways (2020)"
  • The lead is somewhat out of order; the ballad sentence should be the one after recording and the high points part should come with the rest of the critical commentary; also, the ballad part is not sourced in the body anywhere
  • "It is a" → "The song is a"
  • Wikilink accordion
  • "for Rough and Rowdy Ways were written" → "for the album were written"

Background and release

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  • Add the exact release date of Rough and Rowdy Ways in prose because this is needed for the release date in the infobox to be sourced
  • Remove overly obvious wikilink on Los Angeles
  • "Tony Garnier and drummer" → "Tony Garnier, and drummer"
  • Wikilink Hammond organ
  • "A bar stool with Bob Dylan's name" → "A bar stool with Dylan's name" on the img text
  • [6] should be re-invoked at the end of the sentences per usage of direct quoting

Critical reception

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  • Retitle to Reception
  • "the best 25 songs of the year." → "the best 25 songs of 2020."
  • "in his praise" but notes that" → "in his praise", but noted how" and put more of this quote into your own words please
  • "and calls it" → "and called it"
  • "which he cites as" → "which he cited as"
  • "Historian Douglas Brinkley, who conducted" → "Brinkley, who conducted"
  • Merge the Spectrum Culture para with the above one and put more of this into your own words; please invoke the ref at the end of any separated sentences using direct quotes
  • "placed it at" → "placed "Key West" at"
  • Merge the last para with the penultimate one
  • Remove wikilink on Rolling Stone
  • "decade"[26] Associated Press writer" → "decade",[26] while the Associated Press writer"
  • The Father John Misty list is not sourced

Cultural references

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  • Maybe introduce him as a US President so it is clearer?
  • The paras seem like too much; there should be two maximum or maybe even one, also could you not merge this and composition since the references are short here?

Live performances

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  • Remove wikilink on Rolling Stone

Accolades

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  • Rolling Stone should only be wikilinked on the first instance here

Notes

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References

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  • Wikilink The New York Times on ref 2
  • Add a work/publisher for ref 3
  • Wikilink Hyperallergic on ref 4
  • glidemagazine.com → Glide Magazine on ref 5
  • I don't think refs 6 and 7 are reliable unless you can clarify otherwise
  • Wikilink Rolling Stone on ref 8
  • Wikilink HuffPost on ref 9
  • Author-link for Rob Sheffield should be on ref 10 instead of refs 11 and 12
  • Ref 13 is a duplicate of ref 4
  • Wikilink The New Yorker and fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 14
  • Wikilink Hot Press on ref 15
  • Cite Gothamist as publisher instead with the wikilink and remove staff from the author on ref 16
  • Wikilink Extra.ie and cite as publisher instead on ref 17
  • Pipe British GQ to GQ on ref 18
  • To me, it looks like a WP:SELFPUB violation on ref 21
  • faroutmagazine.co.uk → Far Out and pipe to Far Out (website) on ref 30
  • Cite AllMusic as publisher instead with the wikilink on ref 31
  • Ref 34 is a duplicate of ref 23

Final comments and verdict

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