Talk:Keeps Gettin' Better/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 21:55, 4 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comment - The cite templates should use a pattern, some of them lack access date, some of them lack date of publish, its text should follow a pattern for all cite web, some of them start with link, some end with. Re-arrange them and you gain my support Eduemoni ^↑talk↓ 21:37, 7 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Comment Most of the sources in the article are lack of date and author. – HĐ (talk) 03:11, 10 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Thanks guys. Jorn ^talk 00:13, 11 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

General

One connection issue

Lead

It was released on September 9, 2008 by → Need a comma after 2008
It peaked at number seven on the Hot 100, so how could it be her second highest debut at number 6?
and additionally a futuristic → 'Additionally' doesn't work here
through a live performance → 'through'?
Aguilera additionally performed → You use 'additionally' too often, and it doesn't work.

Background

The block quote shouldn't have any quotation marks.
The quote box completely interferes with the block quote, because it doesn't show it as being indented, like it should. Either use the quote box and make the block quote prose, or vice versa. But not box, it doesn't work technically or stylistically.

Composition

(This is how a block quote should look, indented, to get the full effect)

Chart performance

and her first top ten → and became her first top ten
The lead says that "Keeps Gettin Better" is her second highest ever debut, but this says highest ever? Some inconsistency between the two sections.
first debuted → Having 'first' just doesn't make sense.
moving up and peaking number four. → 'Moving up' can go, plus it's redundant because peaking means that it must have climbed anyway.

Charts

2008 and 2009 peaks should be in different tables.
You could add a certifications box. Even if it hasn't been certified Platinum, you could still put 1,100,000 for sales.

Refs.

MTV News and Viacom are linked in FN3, but not FN1? It should be the other way around. Only link the first time, or link them all. Not randomly.

External links

You can remove the link for the music video in the Info box as it is here already.

Status

On hold. — ₳aron 16:58, 18 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

All

Done. Jorn ^talk 18:23, 18 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Passing. — ₳aron 21:21, 18 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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