Talk:Karl Schädler
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Karl Schädler has been listed as one of the History good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: March 29, 2024. (Reviewed version). |
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A fact from Karl Schädler appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 19 April 2024 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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Reviewer: Chaotic Enby (talk · contribs) 19:29, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
Starting the review, will update it as I go through. Article looks pretty good, if a bit on the short side given that the external links add a lot more material that could be used (in German, unfortunately).
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Review
[edit]- Well-written:
- Verifiable with no original research:
- Broad in its coverage:
- Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
- Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
- Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
Criteria | Notes | Result |
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(a) (prose) | He supported Pan-Germanism under Austrian leadership, due to the formation of a German state without them would have isolated Liechtenstein and threatened its independence. Does that mean "without Austria" or "without Liechtenstein"? managed to maintain order in Liechtenstein, or later what his position of District Administratorentailed (assuming it is an executive position, it could also be added to the infobox). (Later comment: Much better, but could still be a bit more detailed, especially as these were important roles that are somewhat glossed over.) (Later later comment: Should be good now!) |
Pass |
(b) (MoS) | The lead is well-written and follows the MoS (Later comment: Please look at words to watch such as "leading" or "important" and try to rephrase them in more precise terms, and it should be good.) (Later later comment: "Leading" is only used to say he, well, led the movement, so it's fine, no other "words to watch" left.) |
Pass |
Criteria | Notes | Result |
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(a) (references) | (Later comment: The source mentions a more vague Linken Zentrum rather than the Württemberger Hof, could be better to have a precise source?) (Later later comment: Fixed) |
Pass |
(b) (citations to reliable sources) | Most information comes from a single encyclopedia, which isn't ideal but not a fail condition either. Every non-lead paragraph ends with a citation, with the exception of the sentence about the plaque (which, being next to its picture, isn't really likely to be challenged). | Pass |
(c) (original research) | No original research, again, everything appears to be sourced. | Pass |
(d) (copyvio and plagiarism) | Earwig shows nothing, with the only matches being the German titles of the works mentioned. However, looking at a translation of the main source used, many paragraphs appear to be close paraphrasing (the #Early life and #Medical career sections, and also much of #Political career). (Later comment: Still too many close paraphrasing issues, paragraphs should be rewritten rather than having word replaced by synonyms.) (Later later comment: Close paraphrasing nearly gone except for the third paragraph of "Political career") (Later later comment: Appears to be good.) |
Pass |
Notes | Result |
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Doesn't take sides in 19th-century Liechtenstein politics, all political claims are well-attributed. | Pass |
Notes | Result |
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No edit war or disagreement between editors to be seen. | Pass |
Result
[edit]Result | Notes |
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Pass | Please fix all the close paraphrasing issues ASAP and rewrite the sections you translated from the encyclopedia in your own words. I would ask for the opinion of a German speaker to see if the sources mentioned in #External links can add further information to the article. (Later later comment: Much better, a tiny bit of close paraphrasing left to rephrase and it should pass. Coverage isn't perfect everywhere, but still broad enough for GA.) (Final comment: Looks good, asking for a quick second opinion to be sure as it is my first review, but I think it should pass) |
Discussion
[edit]- Updated the review in light of recent improvements. The close paraphrasing remains the biggest issue to be fixed. Chaotıċ Enby (talk · contribs) 00:24, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
- Should be fixed now, @Chaotic Enby. TheBritinator (talk) 11:51, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
Did you know nomination
[edit]- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Bruxton talk 02:29, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
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- ... that in 1848 Karl Schädler preformed the first chloroform anaesthesia surgery in Liechtenstein? Source: https://historisches-lexikon.li/Schädler,_Karl_(1804–1872)
- ALT1: ... that due to the rise of pan-Germanism, Karl Schädler considered that Liechtenstein should be annexed into Austria? Source: https://historisches-lexikon.li/Schädler,_Karl_(1804–1872)
- ALT2: ... that Karl Schädler completed most of the work on creating a Liechtenstein constitution, despite having no legal training? Source: https://historisches-lexikon.li/Schädler,_Karl_(1804–1872)
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Gerboise Verte
Moved to mainspace by TheBritinator (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 8 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.TheBritinator (talk) 02:06, 1 April 2024 (UTC).
- Long enough and nice GA. All paragraphs are referenced. Interesting hook and it is referenced. There's no copyvio or close paraphrasing. You need to provide a QPQ for this hook to be accepted. --2x2leax (talk) 06:01, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
- I will complete one soon. TheBritinator (talk) 15:30, 3 April 2024 (UTC)
- @2x2leax, QPQ is now linked. Please check again when you can. TheBritinator (talk) 18:10, 3 April 2024 (UTC)
- @TheBritinator Well, you are participating in that nomination for QPQ, so I accept it. --2x2leax (talk) 06:15, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
- @2x2leax, QPQ is now linked. Please check again when you can. TheBritinator (talk) 18:10, 3 April 2024 (UTC)
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