Talk:K-61 (Kansas highway)/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 01:17, 4 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 06:16, 31 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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@420Traveler: Your prose needs a bit of fine-tuning. I can't see the forest sometimes through the trees of SHC resolutions and dollar amounts in the history section. However, you have all your facts right. Archive references; the last four from the Hutchinson News need citation information added. 7-day hold. Ping me when done. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 06:40, 31 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Copy changes were made, and I took care of the remaining reference cleanup/archival. Passing. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 01:17, 4 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Copy changes

Lead

The highway travels mostly through rural areas, however does pass through South Hutchinson and Hutchinson where it intersects K-14, K-96, and US-50. K-61 is signed as a north–south but runs in southwest to northeast direction. Tweak to The highway travels mostly through rural areas; however, it does pass through South Hutchinson and Hutchinson, where it intersects K-14, K-96, and US-50. K-61 is signed as a north–south route but runs in a southwest to northeast direction.

Route description

Join the first two sentences with a semicolon
Join the two NHS sentences to reduce redundancy
Commas around "on average"
Add "the" before "small community of"
Capitalize "Street" in "80th street"
Add comma after Wolf Creek to balance the appositive
Add a comma after "access westbound US-50" to join the two complete sentences
Remove comma after "McNew Road"
Add hyphen in "controlled-access highway"
Comma after "Center Street"

History

Add (SHC) by "State Highway Commission of Kansas" as this acronym is heavily used.
Overuse of "In a resolution on..." sentence starters. Paragraph 2 suffers from this badly.
"Mid April" should be "mid-April". This also happens with "mid February" later.
"will be started" — change to past tense for a past event
"It had supposed" — should be "It had been supposed"
There are many monetary amounts and inflation calculations. Consider reducing their frequency; they may be excessive detail.
Also too many sentences start with "By (year)", especially in the Hutchinson rerouting section.
By 1975, the entire section of K-61 from US-50 north in Hutchinson was four-lanes. Remove hyphen in "four-lanes"
The section of former K-61 from the new K-61 to US-81, and former section of US-81 from there north to US-56 became K-61 Spur. remove comma
Very choppy: The city of McPherson complained about the removal of US-81 Alternate. Then in a resolution passed on March 29, 1967, it was approved to re-establish US-81 Alternate in McPherson. These sentences should be combined.
Improvements section has several uses of "Fall (year)" which are against MOS:SEASONS.
"p.m." and "pm" in the same sentence: pick one.
"has been designated" should be "was designated".

Source spot checks

I have randomly selected 10 sources for spot checks.

16 Y Map verifies description of course through Arlington.
32 Y Bids for grading. For AP articles, consider adding |agency=Associated Press in the citation template.
34 Y Bid approval.
48 Y Opening date.
49 Y Verifies description of former routing.
53 Y Shows segment was not open in 1963.
60 Y Shows full segment was not four lanes until 1975.
63 Y I-35W construction plans.
77 Y Redesignation of US 81 Alt. as Bus. through McPherson.
81 Y October 2011 opening of route and Koss Construction as general contractor for both counties' portions.

References

References 80 through 83 need full citation information—title, publication, etc. They appear to be Hutchinson News articles.
Archive references using IABot.
Earwig shows no issues.
No image issues (not applicable).

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