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Nominator: Kimikel (talk · contribs) 00:24, 6 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Rollinginhisgrave (talk · contribs) 02:40, 11 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this for GARC Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 02:40, 11 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Finished up. Thanks for an enjoyable read, you write very well, and I perhaps felt obligated to nitpick. Feel free to flag disagreement. Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 11:48, 12 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Prose and content

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  • I can see Army is capitalized in Peruvian Army. Is this reflective of RS' use?
  • leading to Cáceres' reelection in August of that year mention whether this was Borgoño's intention as it's a bit confusing if he won or lost the election
  • Mention in the lede what year he was president to contextualize when it occurred between the War of the Pacific and his retirement.
  • Why do you use such a long name for his father? According to the Spanish article it's not how he was commonly referred to.
  • established government, and against the forces I think , and should be removed
  • continued to administrate → administrated
  • sustained an injury to his right leg euphemistic
  • following his release from captivity
  • During that year, he was
  • WP:CINS
    • , and became the President of Peru in April 1894
    • , and then transferred to the Morro Solar in Chorrillos.
    • ... so on
  • combated → fought
  • the disarmament of → disarming
  • Could you clarify if he held elected position before Cáceres became President?
  • What is article 91?
  • 10 August 1894, succeeding Borgoño ? What do you think
  • What is violent intervention?
  • Borgoño decided to leave[left] Peru and relocate[d]
  • by thieves haha
  • Is there anything you can cut from the infobox?

Suggestions

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  • capturing → capture
  • which he continued to administrate until the outbreak of the War of the Pacific. → continued to administrate for twenty years (avoids repetition of outbreak of the War of the Pacific in following sentence.
  • attended to consider → treated, as it is a bit euphemistic
  • Ancon, Lima MOS:GEOLINK

Sources

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  • [4] Green tickY
  • [8] Green tickY Do you think he would pass GNG?
  • [11] Green tickY
  • [15] Magenta clockclock The elections called by Borgoño offered Cáceres as its only candidate This reads as the ballot being controlled rather than opponents abstaining
  • [19] Can you quote this for me?
  • [23] As with this one, not loading on my device for some reason.

Other

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  • Images Magenta clockclock would the bust be under copyright in Spain? Would a picture simply of the bust be able to fall under copyright?
  • Broad / summary style Green tickY
  • Neutral Green tickY
  • Stable Green tickY
  • COPYVIO / No OR Green tickY 1% earwig, nothing found in spot check so far

Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 11:20, 12 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]