Talk:Justiniano Borgoño/GA1
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Nominator: Kimikel (talk · contribs) 00:24, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Rollinginhisgrave (talk · contribs) 02:40, 11 November 2024 (UTC)
I'll review this for GARC Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 02:40, 11 November 2024 (UTC)
- Finished up. Thanks for an enjoyable read, you write very well, and I perhaps felt obligated to nitpick. Feel free to flag disagreement. Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 11:48, 12 November 2024 (UTC)
Prose and content
[edit]- I can see Army is capitalized in Peruvian Army. Is this reflective of RS' use?
leading to Cáceres' reelection in August of that year
mention whether this was Borgoño's intention as it's a bit confusing if he won or lost the election- Mention in the lede what year he was president to contextualize when it occurred between the War of the Pacific and his retirement.
- Why do you use such a long name for his father? According to the Spanish article it's not how he was commonly referred to.
established government, and against the forces
I think , and should be removedcontinued to administrate
→ administratedsustained an injury to his right leg
euphemisticfollowing his release
from captivityDuringthat year, he was- WP:CINS
, and became the President of Peru in April 1894
, and then transferred to the Morro Solar in Chorrillos.
- ... so on
combated
→ foughtthe disarmament of
→ disarming- Could you clarify if he held elected position before Cáceres became President?
- What is article 91?
10 August 1894,
? What do you thinksucceeding Borgoño- What is violent intervention?
Borgoño
decided to leave[left] Peru and relocate[d]
hahaby thieves- Is there anything you can cut from the infobox?
Suggestions
[edit]- capturing → capture
which he continued to administrate until the outbreak of the War of the Pacific.
→ continued to administrate for twenty years (avoids repetition of outbreak of the War of the Pacific in following sentence.attended to
consider → treated, as it is a bit euphemistic- Ancon, Lima MOS:GEOLINK
Sources
[edit]- [4]
- [8] Do you think he would pass GNG?
- [11]
- [15]
The elections called by Borgoño offered Cáceres as its only candidate
This reads as the ballot being controlled rather than opponents abstaining - [19] Can you quote this for me?
- [23] As with this one, not loading on my device for some reason.
Other
[edit]- Images would the bust be under copyright in Spain? Would a picture simply of the bust be able to fall under copyright?
- Broad / summary style
- Neutral
- Stable
- COPYVIO / No OR 1% earwig, nothing found in spot check so far