Talk:Justiniano Borgoño
Justiniano Borgoño is currently a Politics and government good article nominee. Nominated by Kimikel (talk) at 00:24, 6 August 2024 (UTC) An editor has indicated a willingness to review the article in accordance with the good article criteria and will decide whether or not to list it as a good article. Comments are welcome from any editor who has not nominated or contributed significantly to this article. This review will be closed by the first reviewer. To add comments to this review, click discuss review and edit the page. Short description: Peruvian brigadier general and politician (1836–1921) |
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A fact from Justiniano Borgoño appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 17 September 2024 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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[edit]- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by SL93 talk 22:15, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
- ... that after being held as a prisoner of war for three months, Justiniano Borgoño's (pictured) release was brokered by an enemy general?
- Source: Grandes Forjadores del Perú (in Spanish) pp. 80–81.
- ALT1: ... that a bust of former President of Peru Justiniano Borgoño (pictured) was stolen from its pedestal by thieves? Source: https://rpp.pe/peru/la-libertad/trujillo-alameda-de-los-heroes-luce-deteriorada-y-sucia-noticia-1045116
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/M/T Petar Hektorović
Kimikel (talk) 02:54, 19 July 2024 (UTC).
- The page had 649 B of readable prose prior to expansion, and currently has 8755, so it has been successfully expanded over 5 times. WP:EARWIG says "Violation Unlikely". QPQ is done. Hooks are interesting. However, there is a problem with this nomination. The first hook is cited to a Google Doc that I cannot access. I don't know what the document is or if it's even reliable. With a better source this should be good to go. Di (they-them) (talk) 18:33, 19 July 2024 (UTC)
- [1] I'm not sure why it didn't work the link didn't work the first time; it's not working for me either. This link is just the only available online upload, it is a real book with ISBN 9789972625503 (just so you know it's not just a random google file) Kimikel (talk) 22:08, 19 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you, good to go! Di (they-them) (talk) 00:16, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
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Nominator: Kimikel (talk · contribs) 00:24, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Rollinginhisgrave (talk · contribs) 02:40, 11 November 2024 (UTC)
I'll review this for GARC Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 02:40, 11 November 2024 (UTC)
- Finished up. Thanks for an enjoyable read, you write very well, and I perhaps felt obligated to nitpick. Feel free to flag disagreement. Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 11:48, 12 November 2024 (UTC)
Prose and content
[edit]- I can see Army is capitalized in Peruvian Army. Is this reflective of RS' use?
leading to Cáceres' reelection in August of that year
mention whether this was Borgoño's intention as it's a bit confusing if he won or lost the election- Mention in the lede what year he was president to contextualize when it occurred between the War of the Pacific and his retirement.
- Why do you use such a long name for his father? According to the Spanish article it's not how he was commonly referred to.
established government, and against the forces
I think , and should be removedcontinued to administrate
→ administratedsustained an injury to his right leg
euphemisticfollowing his release
from captivityDuringthat year, he was- WP:CINS
, and became the President of Peru in April 1894
, and then transferred to the Morro Solar in Chorrillos.
- ... so on
combated
→ foughtthe disarmament of
→ disarming- Could you clarify if he held elected position before Cáceres became President?
- What is article 91?
10 August 1894,
? What do you thinksucceeding Borgoño- What is violent intervention?
Borgoño
decided to leave[left] Peru and relocate[d]
hahaby thieves- Is there anything you can cut from the infobox?
Suggestions
[edit]- capturing → capture
which he continued to administrate until the outbreak of the War of the Pacific.
→ continued to administrate for twenty years (avoids repetition of outbreak of the War of the Pacific in following sentence.attended to
consider → treated, as it is a bit euphemistic- Ancon, Lima MOS:GEOLINK
Sources
[edit]- [4]
- [8] Do you think he would pass GNG?
- [11]
- [15]
The elections called by Borgoño offered Cáceres as its only candidate
This reads as the ballot being controlled rather than opponents abstaining - [19] Can you quote this for me?
- [23] As with this one, not loading on my device for some reason.
Other
[edit]- Images would the bust be under copyright in Spain? Would a picture simply of the bust be able to fall under copyright?
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