Talk:Johnny Jeter/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 01:22, 5 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The article is close to a GA, though I found a few issues with it:

The lead is a bit confusing in its flow. Namely, "which led to him signing with WWE. In 2004, he began competing in tag team competition with Matt Cappotelli where" makes it sound like the team was formed in WWE rather than OVW, and just before that, "He began working for Ohio Valley Wrestling (OVW), which led to him signing with WWE." <- wouldn't you have to be signed with WWE to work in OVW to begin with?
- I think I got this, not sure. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 21:02, 5 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  - No. OVW, while a developmental territory for WWE, also had wrestlers contracted to them, but not to WWE. The majority of these wrestlers were there to try and get a WWE contract however, and some like Jeter succeeded. ♥Nici♥Vampire♥Heart♥ 20:00, 6 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]
If you can, make the Spirit Squad section a bit more based on Johnny. His role didn't seem to be that big though, so if it can't be done don't worry about it.
- I've tried to reduce the emphasis on the other members, but there's not much I can add to expand on Jeter's role. ♥Nici♥Vampire♥Heart♥ 20:00, 6 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]
There's virtually no personal life info. I can understand not too much, but beyond the one sentence in the section is there really nothing you can add?
- Barring Dykstra and now Nemeth, the other three Spirit Squad members did virtually no interviews (that I can find anyway), and info about their personal lives is severely restricted. Usually, Canadian Online Explorer will have some info on their early lives or something, but they launch straight into Jeter's wrestling career.

I'll put the article on hold and pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 01:22, 5 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. ♥Nici♥Vampire♥Heart♥ 20:00, 6 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

No problem. Everything checks out, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 20:43, 6 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]