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Former good articleJohn Dwight (manufacturer) was one of the Agriculture, food and drink good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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DateProcessResult
October 4, 2020Good article nomineeListed
February 26, 2023Good article reassessmentDelisted
Did You Know
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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Austin Church and John Dwight were the first to commercially manufacture baking soda in the United States, and the former was first to use the Arm & Hammer trademark logo (pictured) for selling it?
Current status: Delisted good article
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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:John Dwight (manufacturer)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Eddie891 (talk · contribs) 01:20, 1 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I intend to review this shortly. Eddie891 Talk Work 01:20, 1 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments
  • "Nathaniel's father, Dwight's great grandfather, was Captain Timothy Dwight" I think this connection is too much of a stretch to have here, for a non-notable individual
  • "He was in the same class with " -> "same class as"
  • "In 1847 he went into partnership" perhaps "in 1847 the two entered into a partnership" or "the two began a partnership" or smth similar
  • "Church was the one that concocted the formula to be the first in the United States to devise a method of manufacturing the product as a company item to sell" perhaps "Church was the first in the United States to devise a method of manufacturing sodium bicarbonate as an item that could be sold" or something similar?
  • " first under the Cow Brand trademark" what value does 'first' add here?
  • "They packaged the product this way for hygiene and personally filled the bags themselves" who is 'they'? 'themselves' seems redundant here
  • "Arm & Hammer baking soda dominated" at what point did they 'dominate' the market?
  • "Cow brand was preferred " -> "Cow Brand was preferred "
  • "as well like as a" seems off to me.
  • "The spot is where Dwight was born" what is the spot?
  • Images are good.
  • No copyvio
  • Sourcing looks good
    • I don't see Dwight and Church sold the powder product in red paper bags under the Cow Brand trademark. in provided source
    • Page for citation #7 may be off, I don't see anything there
    • In citation #1, I don't see that WIlliam White was 'of Springfield, Mass'
    • I think you could just list the names of his children. What they did isn't really relevant. If you decide keep it essentially as is, I suggest 1) removing 'Mrs.' from the names of the women, and not say 'became' so much, rephrasing to avoid repetition of that word
    • Sources 4 and 16 are the same
@Eddie891: All additional issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:16, 4 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Copyright contributor investigation and Good article reassessment

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This article is part of Wikipedia:Contributor copyright investigations/20210315 and the Good article (GA) drive to reassess and potentially delist over 200 GAs that might contain copyright and other problems. An AN discussion closed with consensus to delist this group of articles en masse, unless a reviewer opens an independent review and can vouch for/verify content of all sources. Please review Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/February 2023 for further information about the GA status of this article, the timeline and process for delisting, and suggestions for improvements. Questions or comments can be made at the project talk page. MediaWiki message delivery (talk) 09:36, 9 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]