Talk:Joe Burrow/GA1
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Reviewer: Bait30 (talk · contribs) 21:47, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
I'll take a look at this. My review should be complete sometime within the next 7 days. Bait30 Talk 2 me pls? 21:47, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- lead looks good.
Early years
[edit]- "The elder Burrow, whose last coaching position was defensive coordinator for the Ohio Bobcats for more than a decade, retired after the 2018 season in part to be able to see all of Joe's games in his final college season.": personally, this sentence might a little bit out of scope. (3b)
- "One day while visiting the office": unclear what "the office" is referring to. (1a)
- "the seven year old had a future": might be better to say "the seven year old Burrow had a future" (1a)
- "Jimmy Burrow": try to keep it consistent. either Jim Burrow or Jimmy Burrow, but not both. (1a)
College career
[edit]- looks good
Professional career
[edit]- "Burrow was one of 58 players invited to the draft, which was held virtually due to social distancing regulations arising from the COVID-19 pandemic, where he was selected first overall by the Cincinnati Bengals." The "which was held virtually...pandemic" part isn't necessary in my opinion. And I would specify which draft. (1a/3b)
- "He became the first rookie n NFL history": fix minor typo (1a)
- Statistics table: instead of making "Career" an external link, just cite it in the same style as the College statistics table. In other words, make it a proper citation. (2b)
Joe played in 17 games in 2021, not 16. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Muthchri (talk • contribs) 16:55, 17 June 2022 (UTC)
Personal life
[edit]- it's fine
Images
[edit]- All images are related with appropriate copyright tags.
Bait30 Talk 2 me pls? 23:29, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
References
[edit]The reference numbers come from this version of the article.
- 23: I'm not sure that Tiger Droppings can be considered a reliable source. I can't find any evidence on their website about editorial oversight per WP:QUESTIONABLE.
- Replaced with reliable source. Lucky7jrk (talk) 15:24, 31 October 2020 (UTC)
Ok, my review is done. I'll place this on hold for the standard 7 days. Bait30 Talk 2 me pls? 04:40, 31 October 2020 (UTC)
- Your changes look good. The article passes all the criteria now. Bait30 Talk 2 me pls? 06:13, 1 November 2020 (UTC)