Talk:Japanese destroyer Keyaki (1944)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 10:07, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

I'll take this one. Comments to follow in due course. Zawed (talk) 10:07, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

• In the infobox, the stricken and fate fields aren't used which is unusual
• the Second Fleet on 1–20 April suggest "the Second Fleet from 1–20 April"?
• Presumably no links for the Destroyer Squadron and/or Division?
  • I don't think that I have anything that even lists the various squadrons and their divisions, so not even a redlink.
• The division was disbanded suggest specifying which division, presumably Destroyer Division 53?
  • Yep, the last one mentioned.
• Japanese personnel in 1945–1947 suggest "Japanese personnel from late 1945 to 1947"
• Rohwer is listed in the bibliography but not actually cited.
• Image tags check out OK, but I suggest putting the Keyaki one in the infobox rather than use the sister ship image.

That's it for me. Zawed (talk) 10:06, 3 December 2020 (UTC)

• • Thanks for reviewing this.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:56, 3 December 2020 (UTC)

• I am happy with this one so am passing as GA, I consider it meets the relevant criteria. Zawed (talk) 07:13, 6 December 2020 (UTC)