Talk:Jagdgeschwader III/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:20, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:20, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y (14.5% is highest, due to incidental parallels.) 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No Dead links Y

Prose Suggestions

Lede

• and wanted to assign a fighter wing to each of three attacking Armees. suggest you change this to and wanted to assign a fighter wing to each of the three Armees involved in the attack.
  • Excellent suggestion. Slight rewrite.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:04, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
• not to mention frequent changes of airfields during withdrawals, suggest along with frequent changes of airfields during withdrawals,
  • Done.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:04, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Operational history

• Flying was kept to a bare minimum. JG III husbanded its resources while awaiting the upcoming offensive. suggest Flying was kept to a bare minimum, as JG III was husbanding its resources while awaiting the upcoming offensive.** Done.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:04, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
• @Georgejdorner: That is all of my comments, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 15:51, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Many thanks for a speedy review.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:04, 9 March 2018 (UTC)