Talk:Jack King (footballer, born 1985)

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Re-instated by Mark Arsten as per request of original author DaPlayerX, upon providing additional source, showing that both Jack King and Jeffrey Monakana have now both played oficially for the team. DaPlayerX (talk) 21:00, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 22:16, 10 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take a look at this one, will post review shortly. Kosack (talk) 22:16, 10 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Initial review:

Lead and infobox

Is there a source available for his height in the infobox?
English footballer > English professional footballer.

Early career

"On not being offered the deal", should it be "a deal" instead of the?
"King was scheduled to go and train with Bristol Rovers", a few unnecessary words perhaps. "Was scheduled to train" would be sufficient.
Welsh FA > Football Association of Wales.

Non-League

Heading, Non-League > Non-league.
Ref 2 states he was a Groundworker at his father's company, would be worth mentioning I think.

Preston North End

Unlink Football League, per WP:OVERLINK. Already linked in previous section.

Scunthorpe United

Unlink League One, already linked in previous section.

Stevenage

Unlink Stevenage and Hartlepool United, both already linked in previous section.

Style of play

Unlink Preston North End and Graham Westley, both already linked previously.

Honours

Section needs sourcing.

Overall, a very tidy and well laid out article that substantially covers his playing career. No copyvio problems, only some minor issues to attend to. Placed on hold for seven days. Kosack (talk) 22:59, 10 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Kosack. Thanks for taking the time out to review the article. Have made all of the above changes, please let me know if there is anything else. Cheers. SBFCEdit (talk) 02:22, 11 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@SBFCEdit: No worries, that's all for me. A very tidy piece of work, promoting. Kosack (talk) 07:03, 11 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]