Talk:Jack Ely/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 12:09, 28 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
"best known as the singer of The Kingsmen's version of "Louie Louie"." - Reading this phrase, I first assumed that he covered the song, but then I realize that he was a member of the band. Perhaps reword to "best known for the song "Louie Louie" with The Kingsmen"
Changed to "Jack Ely (born September 11, 1943) is an American guitarist and singer, best known for singing The Kingsmen's version of "Louie Louie"." ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 14:05, 28 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"Ken Ely died when he was five years old of polio of the spine, " Perhaps: Ken Ely died of spine polio when Jack was five years old,
Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 14:21, 28 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Mike Mitchell is a dab
Dabbed. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 17:16, 28 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Link Red Cross
Linked. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 00:56, 29 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"on April 6 at 10 AM the Kingsmen walked into the three-microphone recording studio. " - better place the date at the end
Reworded. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:10, 29 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Just a few corrections needed. --Kürbis (✔) 12:23, 28 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Pass!--Kürbis (✔) 09:38, 29 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Pass/Fail:

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