Talk:Izumo-class cruiser/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ian Rose (talk · contribs) 23:33, 20 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Will start on this shortly. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 23:33, 20 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Toolbox check -- no dab or EL issues.

Structure/prose/detail -- let me know if any probs with my copyediting; other points:

"Iwate served as the flagship for the divisional commander, Rear Admiral Misu Sotarō, and Izumo for the fleet commander, Vice Admiral Kamimura Hikonojō" -- This seems to imply that Izumo was also a flagship, is that what's meant? If so I'd be explicit about it, if not I'd rephrase to say exactly what her relationship was to Hikonojō.
"Kamimura left Rurik to the tender administrations of his reinforcements" -- This almost sounds like "to the tender mercies", or do we in fact mean "administration by ships' tender(s)"?

Referencing -- couple of tweaks but basically formatting/reliability seems fine

Images -- US PD tag for File:Asama class 8 inch gun turret right elevation.jpg?

Summary -- just those three things above. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 00:23, 21 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. See if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:13, 22 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Tks, look good, passing as GA. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 00:12, 23 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]