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Reviewer: Usernameunique (talk · contribs) 23:47, 5 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Lead

  • The lead is concise but somewhat short; I'd consider expanding it slightly. Places you could consider adding are Kalhor's disability and his times.

Infobox

  • Probably not relevant, but what does "I.R." stand for?

Background

  • Is "Iran" singular (Iran has) or plural (Iran have)? Regardless, the second sentence ("The nation sent...") should take a singular form.
    • I'm not seeing the problem on this point. Courcelles (talk) 01:02, 6 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
      • Right now the second sentence states "The nation... have sent," which is grammatically incorrect. It should be "The nation... has sent."
  • "Sadegh Kalhor was the only athlete sent to Sochi by Iran, as he had been for the three immediately preceding Winter Paralympics." — Consider adding that even in the first Iranian Paralympics, there was only one other person.
  • This section should have some information about the 2014 Paralympics generally.

Alpine skiing

Photographs

  • I added a caption and alt text to the flag of Iran. How about a photograph of Sadegh Kalhor? If you can't find anything with an appropriate license, I think you could reasonably fair use an image.

Looks good overall, Courcelles. I think it should be expanded slightly in a number of places, and a photograph would be nice, but it's not far off. --Usernameunique (talk) 23:47, 5 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]