Talk:Invasion of Kagera/GA1

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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 20:18, 26 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this last non-GA-class article about the Uganda–Tanzania War in the near future. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 20:18, 26 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

In October 1978 Uganda invaded the Kagera Salient in northern Tanzania Unlink current countries.
Idi Amin is overlinked.
- Fixed.
The Tanzanians organised a counterattack later American counterattack.
- Fixed all counter-attacks.
the Kagera Salient—a 720 square mile stretch No metric units?
- Conversion displayed.
and the Kagera River 18 miles to the south Same as above.
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the Tanzania People's Defence Force (TPDF) to prepare a counterattack American counterattack. I'll continue later on. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 19:51, 28 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

More to come

a military coup that overthrew the President of Uganda Link President of Uganda here instead of linking only Uganda.
- Done.
deterioration of relations with neighbouring Tanzania Unlink Tanzania here.
- Done.
agreed to mediation overseen by the President of Somalia Link President of Somalia.
- Done.
in the signing of the Mogadishu Agreement Link the Mogadishu Agreement.
- Done.
withdraw to positions at least 10 kilometres away No English units?
What were Uganda's primary units? English or already metric units?
- Seems they were already using metric at the time [1].
a 720 square mile stretch of land between the official border and the Kagera River 18 miles No metric units?
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which were further exacerbated by a United States boycott Unlink the US because of common term.
- Done.
Amin and soldiers loyal to the Vice-President of Uganda Link the Vice-President of Uganda. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 13:56, 29 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
- Done.

More to come

Tanzania had tense relations with Zaire, Kenya, and Malawi, and the only forces defending Unlink Malawi.
- Done.
Is there a link for Radio Uganda?
- No.
32 kilometres south of the border and just south No English units?
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observation posts reported Ugandan maneuvers on the other side of the border American maneuvers.
- Anglicanised.
It was equipped with 122 mm mortars No English units?
- Added.
a 120 mm howitzer, and a few 85 mm guns No English units for the 85 mm guns?
- Added.
though one landed 50 metres from the hospital No English units?
- Done.
approximately 3,000 Ugandan troops[23][15] Re-order the ref here.
- Done.
destroying the 75 metre centre section of the bridge --> "destroying the 75-metre centre section of the bridge" and no English units?
- Done.
Ugandan aggression: Mengistu Haile Mariam of Ethiopia, Didier Ratsiraka of Madagascar, Agostinho Neto of Angola, Seretse Khama of Botswana, Samora Machel of Mozambique, and Kenneth Kaunda of Zambia Unlink all the current countries except for Madagascar which has to be piped to the Democratic Republic of Madagascar.
- Done.
a coalition of countries committed to ending Apartheid in South Africa Unlink South Africa.
- Done.
The governments of Guinea, Mali, Senegal, and several other African states Unlink the current countries.
- Done.
The Ugandan government offered to accept mediation from Libya Pipe Libya to the History of Libya under Muammar Gaddafi.
- Done.
a 10% "temporary war tax" was raised on soft drinks Use per cent instead of the symbol.
- Done.
The study concluded that by 1981 75% of pre-war infrastructure MOS says "Adjacent quantities not comparable should usually be in different formats: twelve 90-minute volumes or 12 ninety-minute volumes, not 12 90-minute volumes or twelve ninety-minute volumes." We should use a different format for "75" also we should use per cent, not the symbol is only used in infoboxes and tables.
- 75% changed to "three fourths"

I'll continue later on. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 14:06, 4 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Images

File:Idi_Amin_cropped.jpg isn't there a better quality photo about Adi Amin at that time?
- None that are indisputably public domain.

Sources

Ref 51 hasn't an access-date.
- Added.
Ref 56, same as above.
- Added
Ref 71, no link to the website?
- Ref 71 is a book citation.
Some books have no location, why is that so?
- Locations added.
Try to standardise the hyphens in the ISBNs.
- Hyphenated.
Kamazima Google Books' title shouldn't have an URL to the book itself. Because Google Books doesn't give us a preview.
- Removed.
Kamazima other book's ISSN is dead on my screen.
- Worldcat doesn't have it, but it's correct according to the publications' website.
Hooper Google Books' title shouldn't have an URL to the book itself. Because Google Books doesn't give us a preview.
- Removed.
This is really strange. Roberts' link goes to the "Politics and Violence in Eastern Africa: The Struggles of Emerging States" book not Roberts' title?
- That's because Roberts wrote the chapter "The Uganda–Tanzania War, the fall of Idi Amin, and the failure of African diplomacy, 1978–1979" that was published in that compilation book. I've changed the url parameter so it links the book, not the chapter.

Infobox

Looks good to me.

That's anything from me. I'll place it on hold. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 13:57, 5 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hey Indy may I ask you "are you done with addressing my comments? Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 10:26, 18 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@CPA-5: Sorry for the wait, all should be addressed now. -Indy beetle (talk) 01:49, 19 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I'll pass it, nice work. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 14:55, 19 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]