Talk:In Your Eyes (Inna song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 22:18, 3 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

Something is wrong with the flatlist, you are missing something in the songwriter(s) section.

Done

Lead

Fine.

Background and release

Remove "both"
"are played" → were played. It should be on the same tense.

Done

Composition and reception

"alert" → what do you mean? Fast pace rhythm?
"found "In Your Eyes" was the catchiest" → believed that "In Your Eyes" was the catchiest track from Party Never Ends
although "never mind the silly bit overdubbed in the chorus" → although he found the chorus to have a "silly bit overdubbed"
"Commercially, the track experienced minor success on record charts." → Commercially, the track debuted...
Only one source for the peak? Did he talk on the podcast about when it entered the song?

Done

Music video

"This and other aspects led to the visual being likened to Rihanna's clip for "Pour It Up"" → This and other aspects led its visual being likened to Rihanna's "Pour It Up"
Remove the links from the image as well.

Done.

Live performances

and performed the song. → while performing the song.
"interpreting a cover version of Justin Bieber's "Love Yourself" (2015) and a stripped-down version of "Endless" (2011)" → not relevant
"Inna also opened the Untold Festival in 2016." → same as previous

Done

Track listing

Good idea.

Credits and personnel

"Rokstone Studios – recording studio" → Above in a sentence like "Recorded at Rokstone Studios, London, United Kingdom"

Done

Charts

The Turkish source is not taking me there directly, seems to be an error with "{{" → fix the issue

Done

Release history

Please use this source for radio airplay it has the label.[1]

Done

References

Fine.

External links

Fine

Overall GA review

Address minor issues. On hold for seven days. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:22, 4 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@MarioSoulTruthFan: Thank you very much for the review. I have done everything besides:

Yes, there is only one source for the peaks in Romania. The source is a list of podcasts; seeing the dates "In Your Eyes" reached no X or Y, the readers can select the respective podcast.

How do they know that? Wouldn't it be easier for you to add here the actual podcast as well or use a quote saying which one is for the peak on the debut on the chart?

I think the fact that she sang those two songs at her concert in Mexico is a little bit relevant for the context of the event. Also, it expands the "LIve performances" section a little bit.

That can't be the only aim, the article is not regarding that concert only the performance of that song and should stay that away.

@Cartoon network freak: please reply. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:45, 4 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks again, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:15, 4 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@MarioSoulTruthFan: Done both points + the issue with the thumbnail. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:59, 5 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]