Talk:In Bloom/GA1
GA Review
[edit]- The lead isn't the greatest... needs paragraph split, reorgnisation of information, etc. Like this one.
- There's not as much information on his song as there is on "Smells Like Teen Spirit". One paragraph seems sufficient. I feel the lead hits all the basic points; aside from some tweaking I can't figure out to improve the lead. WesleyDodds (talk)`
- That looks better, yeah. giggy (:O) 08:33, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
- "The songs from these sessions were placed on a demo tape that circulated amongst the music industry, generating interest in the group among major record labels." - couldn't hurt to ref this
- I thought I had, but apparently that wasn't the case. Fixed
- "Vig thought it would be good to start recording a song previously recorded at Smart Studios.."" - where does this quote open? (if there is one)
- Fixed
- No reviewer comments in the Release and reception section?
- Can't really find any. WesleyDodds (talk) 05:23, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
- Here's an AMG review of the song. giggy (:O) 08:33, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
- I'm not sure about using that. it covers points largely already covere dby other sources in the article. In terms of reception, the sentence ""In Bloom"'s music owed more to standard-issue heavy rock than anything else on the album Nevermind; with its mid-tempo power chords and staggered tom-tom fills, it would have sounded perfectly natural blasting out of the tape deck in a rusted-out Camaro if not for Cobain's noisy, fractured guitar solo." is about the only one that seems worth quoting as critical commentary, but even then it's not a contemporary description and I'm not sure how well it'd fit in. WesleyDodds (talk) 08:58, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
- Shrugs. It's not the biggest deal... if you ever feel like adding it in, go ahead, but don't lose sleep over it. giggy (:O) 09:15, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
- I'm not sure about using that. it covers points largely already covere dby other sources in the article. In terms of reception, the sentence ""In Bloom"'s music owed more to standard-issue heavy rock than anything else on the album Nevermind; with its mid-tempo power chords and staggered tom-tom fills, it would have sounded perfectly natural blasting out of the tape deck in a rusted-out Camaro if not for Cobain's noisy, fractured guitar solo." is about the only one that seems worth quoting as critical commentary, but even then it's not a contemporary description and I'm not sure how well it'd fit in. WesleyDodds (talk) 08:58, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
- Here's an AMG review of the song. giggy (:O) 08:33, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
And leave me a note when done please... cheers, giggy (:O) 04:40, 24 June 2008 (UTC)