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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 21:10, 5 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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It feels like I haven't reviewed in a while so I'm coming back! I'll try to review this in the next few days. LOVI33 21:10, 5 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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Background and release

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  • ""I Don't Miss You at All" was released as the fourth and final single on Finneas' debut EP Blood Harmony for digital download and streaming through his record label OYOY on September 20, 2019." → ""I Don't Miss You at All" was released for digital download and streaming on September 20, 2019 as the fourth and final single from Finneas' debut EP Blood Harmony, through his record label OYOY."
  • The release source given doesn't back up that it was released as a single, it is just to the EP release. Please replace this.
  • The iTunes source given also doesn't backup that it was written or produced by Finneas.
  • "Finneas explained in a statement that the song is..." shouldn't this sentence be in the "Music and lyrics" section?

 Not done

  • "while touring New York City" → "while touring in New York City"
  • "He wanted to write a song that" → "He intended to write a song that"

Composition and lyrics

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  • I think you are kind of confused with the tracks genre. The source you've given doesn't say "longing, dark" pop, it says "longing" dark pop. Please change all occurrences of pop to dark pop, with target.
  • Are you sure you need this entire quote?
  • ""I Don't Miss You All" features a synth line that is used for the entire song." put this line in the paragraph above.
  • Target synth to Synthesizer

Reception and promotion

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  • Target music critics to Music journalism
  • "about getting over an ex"." → "about getting over an ex.""
  • "broody bop"." → "broody bop.""
  • Remove the "taken from his highly anticipated debut EP, Blood Harmony" from the last quote and put the period inside the quotations
  • "Finneas toured throughout the United States during October 2019, in support of Blood Harmony. "I Don't Miss You at All" was one of the tracks he performed from the EP during the tour" → ""I Don't Miss You at All" was included on the setlist of Finneas October 2019 United States tour, in support of Blood Harmony."
  • "acoustic version of "I Don't Miss You at All" for" → "acoustic version of the song for"
  • "Digital Fort of him playing "I Don't Miss You At All" on his Spanish" → "Digital Fort of him playing the song on his Spanish"
  • "version of "I Don't Miss You at All" during" → "version of it during"

Release history

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  • Are you sure a release history section is necessary for 1 release, and since its mentioned in the prose? I so:
  • MOS:TABLECAPTION probably: Release dates and formats for "I Don't Miss You At All"
  • "Format" → "Format(s)"
  • Digital download and streaming →
    with targets
  • Again, this ref doesn't back up that it was released as a single.

References

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Final comments and verdit

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Comment I removed the Broadway World "review" as it was taken from a press release of a label (V2 Records), making it a bias reviews V2 Records. Neverthless, here is a replacement 1, althought it is a collage newspaper so I'm not sure it falls under the criteria of being more than just student media. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:28, 14 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

LOVI33, Thanks a lot for the review, lmk if anything else needs to be fixed. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 23:29, 14 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

MarioSoulTruthFan, thanks a lot for doing that. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 23:29, 14 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The Ultimate Boss everything looks good. I would just recommend archiving all the refs. Refs 1, 3, 8, and 9 are still unarchived. LOVI33 23:52, 14 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
LOVI33, done! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 23:59, 14 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Great! ✓ Pass. LOVI33 00:08, 15 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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