Talk:I've Got a Feeling (Ivy song)/GA1
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 01:26, 30 December 2016 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing your article soon.
Infobox
[edit]- Flawless.
Lead
[edit]- Needs to be expanded.
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- was released as the record's second single on October 7, 1997 by Atlantic Records. → where?
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- The single → The track
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- Add a part of the composition "vocals, horn section".
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- Short sentence regarding the CD singles.
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Background and composition
[edit]- This section is too big when comparing to the others, shall we split it?
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- Perhaps split in Background and release in one section, while the other is Production and composition.
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- Split the first and second section in two paragraphs, after the previous point is addressed.
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- I've Got a Feeling" was taken from Ivy's second studio album, Apartment Life, released in 1997 by Atlantic Records. → I've Got a Feeling" was taken from Ivy's second studio album, Apartment Life, released on October 6, 1997 by Atlantic Records as its second single. It was released on October 7, 1997. + sources for all of this.
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- Atlantic also → Atlantic Records also
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- "I've Got a Feeling" was written by Dominique Durand, Adam Schlesinger and Andy Chase, with Lloyd Cole and Peter Nashel handling additional production → add mixing personnel, mastering and so on...
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- It is a pop song.[13] Supported by a horn → It is a pop song,[13] supported by a horn
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- 1960s-style harmonies, → 1960s-style harmonies.
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Critical reception
[edit]- Flick from Billboard' → Flick of Billboard magazine.
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- radio is given a chance → radio if given a chance.
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- "The rest is more lighthearted yet still crafted, cleanly produced, stylized old-pop with warmth, such as the cooing" → AllMusic, has a lot more describing the song
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- "piled on the layers of guitars, creating beautiful, shimmering" → Pop Dose
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- "catchy pop" → MTV
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Music video
[edit]- "A music video for "I've Got a Feeling" was released sometime in 1997." → Source?
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- "while other shots of the members outside of the booth are shown." → while shots of the Ivy members, who are outside of the booth, are displayed.
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- "play guitars" → play two guitars
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- "Durand nods her head" → As I see it in the video, she doesn't nod as much as she lowers her head. At least I don't see it as a nod.
- Done – Much better wording! :) Carbrera (talk) 00:56, 7 January 2017 (UTC).
Track listing and formats
[edit]- Use
{{spaced ndash}}
so there is space on both sides.
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Personnel
[edit]- Same as previous.
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- Two columns is more than enough.
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- Link mixing and mastering.
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Release history
[edit]- Personally I wouldn't use the links in the same column as the countries but its fine.
- Done – Great. Carbrera (talk) 00:56, 7 January 2017 (UTC)
- Add the date to the amazon reference.
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References
[edit]- I would advise to archive all the web sites.
- Unlike the last AllMusic, reference 18.
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External links
[edit]- Fine.
Overall GA review
[edit]- Wait to address any issues until I finish this review.
- You can now address the issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:33, 2 January 2017 (UTC)
- @Carbrera: are up for this? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:58, 6 January 2017 (UTC)
- @MarioSoulTruthFan: I have finished everything, with the exception of archiving the sources. Thank you very much for your review! Carbrera (talk) 01:07, 7 January 2017 (UTC).