Talk:Hurricane Henriette (1995)/GA1
GA Review
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Greetings. I'll be removing the article. Right off the bat, there are problems with the prose. Sentences should not start with a numeral. Either spell them out, or precede them with another word or clause. The rainfall image/maximum for Henriette does not currently lie within the article. This will help eliminate weasel wording in one of your sentences. Check out the TC rainfall climatology for Henriette, and include the relevant information. Refs 7 and 8 don't fit the format of your other references, and need to be fixed (including adding publishing years). Thegreatdr (talk) 14:19, 8 February 2009 (UTC)
Doing... –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 07:03, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
Done –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 07:14, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
- The text "up to 10 inches, with a peak of 13" is contradictory. Also, what is the source of the satellite estimate? I don't see it in the reference section. One this passage is reworded and a reference pointed out or added, I'll pass GA. Everything else looks ok. Thegreatdr (talk) 12:44, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
- Fixed. –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 17:55, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
- I've passed the GA. Congratulations! Thegreatdr (talk) 10:57, 16 February 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks! :) –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 15:11, 16 February 2009 (UTC)
- I've passed the GA. Congratulations! Thegreatdr (talk) 10:57, 16 February 2009 (UTC)
- Fixed. –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 17:55, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
- The text "up to 10 inches, with a peak of 13" is contradictory. Also, what is the source of the satellite estimate? I don't see it in the reference section. One this passage is reworded and a reference pointed out or added, I'll pass GA. Everything else looks ok. Thegreatdr (talk) 12:44, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
