Talk:Howard Bellamy (Doctors)/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 19:26, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 19:26, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
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[edit]- Infobox looks good.
- Thank you! – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
- The lead should summarize the entire article, so mention info from #Casting and #Development.
- Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
- The storylines section looks good.
- Thank you! – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
- Remove the comma after Julia Parsons.
- Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
- Also remove the comma after "the situation".
- Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
- Recite references at the end of each quote per WP:REF.
- Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
- Also try reducing the amounts of quotations overall.
- Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
- Be consistent on either having Digital Spy or Digital Spy.
- Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
- Link Digital Spy only once in #Characterisation.
- Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
- Add a serial comma after "Hollyoaks".
- Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
- Archive all sources (either manually or with this tool).
- Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Responded to your comments – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:01, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
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