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A fact from Homage to Carl Philipp Emanuel Bach appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 6 February 2022 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that when he saw the tapestry Les Dés Sont Jetés, Jørn Utzon exclaimed: "See that? Ours will be better!"?

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 06:22, 1 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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... that architect Jørn Utzon looked at the tapestry Les Dés Sont Jetés and said that his own tapestry would be better? Source: Woven music: The making of Utzon's Homage to CPE Bach, Richard Johnson, Architecture AU, 11 December 2014 "We drove the short distance back to his home where he escorted me through that marvelous living platform of brick, timber and glass, overlooking the forest, to a dining room completely dominated by a large tapestry: a work by Le Corbusier, woven in the 1960s in the great Aubusson workshops. Utzon came very close to the weave and, examining it intently, exclaimed, “There! See that? Ours will be better!”"
ALT1 ... that when he saw the tapestry Les Dés Sont Jetés, Jørn Utzon exclaimed "See that? Ours will be better!"?
- Reviewed: Al Hirschfeld Theatre/Bund für Menschenrecht

Created by No Swan So Fine (talk). Self-nominated at 16:06, 18 January 2022 (UTC).[reply]

Homage to Carl Philipp Emanuel Bach

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: DigitalIceAge (talk) 23:25, 27 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Les Dés Sont Jetés

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: DigitalIceAge (talk) 23:25, 27 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hook overall

The idea of the hook is interesting but I'm wondering if we can use a stronger verb than said—maybe exclaimed, since that word is present in the original quotation. Otherwise both articles are new and long enough free of policy violations or close-paraphrasing. QPQs fulfilled. Nice work. DigitalIceAge (talk) 23:25, 27 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I've added a stroinger ALT. Thanks for picking up on that :) No Swan So Fine (talk) 19:48, 31 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Looks great! Approving ALT1! DigitalIceAge (talk) 22:08, 31 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

ALT1 to T:DYK/P1