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A fact from His Storyy appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 16 May 2021 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the creators of the Indian web series His Storyy changed the ending because of prevailing social discrimination against the LGBTQIA+ community in the country?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2021/May. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/His Story (web series).

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The result was: promoted by Valereee (talk) 17:56, 10 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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... that creators of the Indian web series His Storyy changed the ending due to prevailing social discrimination against LBGTQIA+ community? Source: "It was further revealed that producers DING and ALT Balaji reportedly got cold feet about taking the huge step of showcasing a big fat gay wedding. The actor added saying considering the intolerance that prevails in India towards the LGBTQIA+ community at the moment, the makers chickened out of showing Kunal and Preet tying the knot." (link)

Reviewed: Psyche Showing Her Sisters Her Gifts from Cupid

Moved to mainspace by Canse34 (talk) and Dharmadhyaksha (talk). Nominated by Dharmadhyaksha (talk) at 13:26, 4 May 2021 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by Tbhotch

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: @Canse34 and Dharmadhyaksha: Shouldn't it be titled "His Storyy"?; I'm curious about the cast section, why it has sources for specific people, but not for everyone?; the Episodes section is unsourced but that's valid per MOS:PLOT; however I have to ask this for legal reasons: Unneutral phrases like "Sakshi has successfully built a restaurant", "The ever happy-go-lucky Nihal" or "Father-son have their moment in the party" sound like if they were taken from a website that promotes/broadcast the series, so, were these plot summaries written by any of you or are they translated versions from the Hindi plots? In any case, they should be neutral plots. (CC) Tbhotch^™ 18:17, 7 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Tbhotch: Thanks for your detailed review. All of your comments have been addressed. You may have a look at it again. I have still not moved the page to "His Storyy" though as there are plenty "His Story" and hence the "(web series)" adage seems better to keep. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 07:53, 10 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Issues resolved. New, long enough, and within policy. The hook is sourced and interesting. Good to go. (CC) Tbhotch^™ 14:39, 10 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]