Talk:Halifax County High School
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Clarity: Overall, your article is very clear and easy to understand.
Style & Grammar: Everything looked good. I think the second sentence sounds like a fragment and should maybe be altered a little bit. Where you talk about the student body makeup, you forgot the T at the beginning of the sentence. Other than that, everything looks good.
Wikipedia:Manual of Style: The style of your article is good. It follows the style of most other wikipedia articles.
Accuracy & Trustworthiness: I don't know anything about your high school but from what you have written and the sources cited on your webpage, they seem like notable and reliable sources.
Organization: Your article is organized well. You might want to elaborate a little more on their academics, like what kind of classes they offer and things like that. You might want to add a few more things about your school besides just athletics and the academics. Things like extracurricular activities that your school offers, clubs, etc. Stacy3840J (talk) 16:27, 1 November 2012 (UTC)
As Stacey mentioned, you forgot the "T" in "The" in the fifth sentence and you have an extra period after your first reference. Your sentence above the table of contents doesn't really make sense. I think it would be better broken up into two smaller sentences. I feel like your percentages of ethnicities in the school would be better somewhere else like the introduction since it doesn't really have anything to do with academics themselves. I would discuss different types of classes offered in this section. When listing things in your sport section you should use a colon after "sports" and get rid of "in". Overall the style of the article looks good and it is organized well. Jessica3840J (talk) 16:40, 1 November 2012 (UTC)
The overall article is good I would just go back and fix the couple of grammar errors that you had. Also the one link that you have that is red i believe just needs to be AAA in order to link it correctly. And maybe for the percentages of the population just make a whole new section instead of having it mixed in with the academics. Maybe you could add title the section student body population. Ashley3840J (talk) 16:46, 1 November 2012 (UTC)