Talk:HSwMS John Ericsson/GA1
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Reviewer: JonCatalán(Talk) 06:56, 11 October 2010 (UTC)
- Apart from the usual copyediting, I re-arranged that sentence about the personal union between Sweden and Norway, just like in the other article.
- You switch between the designation of "monitor" and "ironclad". From the article on French ironclads, it seems to me that there began to be a distinguishing difference. Ironclads seemed to become nearer to the modern idea of the battleship, while monitors were less modern. Is this correct?
- Everything checks out, as usual.