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Good articleHSwMS John Ericsson has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starHSwMS John Ericsson is part of the John Ericsson class monitors series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
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DateProcessResult
October 11, 2010Good article nomineeListed
October 31, 2010Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

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Reviewer: JonCatalán(Talk) 06:56, 11 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Apart from the usual copyediting, I re-arranged that sentence about the personal union between Sweden and Norway, just like in the other article.
  • You switch between the designation of "monitor" and "ironclad". From the article on French ironclads, it seems to me that there began to be a distinguishing difference. Ironclads seemed to become nearer to the modern idea of the battleship, while monitors were less modern. Is this correct?
  • Everything checks out, as usual.

JonCatalán(Talk) 07:02, 11 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]