Talk:HMS Euphrates (1813)
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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 16:25, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
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[edit]If I have demonstrated incompetence or caused offense, please let me know. –♠Vamí_IV†♠ 16:25, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
Prose review
[edit][...] and so more were needed to be built.
Seems to me redundant.
- Removed.
[...] Scamander class was one of those put into construction to fill this need.
"one of those"? One of those what? I think some specificity or reduction is required here.
- Removed.
As such Alpheus's class [...]
whomst
- Not sure what you mean here?
- Alpheus isn't a name used before in the article; is this a ghost from a previous article? –♠Vamí_IV†♠ 01:14, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
- Haha I didn't even catch that when reading it through again! Yes, from a previous article for a ship of the class.
[...] a woman at Corfu.
Suggest "on" Corfu, considering it's an island rather than a city.
- Changed.
Ten days after receiving the first news of Exmouth [...]
Suggest "first despatch", as "of Exmouth" here makes him sound like an event unto himself.
- Reworded.
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- @Vami IV: Hi, thanks for reviewing this! I've responded above, with one unactioned point that I've queried. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 16:47, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
- @Vami IV: Responded above...oops! Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 01:25, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
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