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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 08:50, 14 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this one in the next few days. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:50, 14 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Design

  • both of which were anomalous types: suggest "both of which were anomalous types of ships"
  • Done
  • the navy ordered...: shouldn't navy be capitalised?
  • Reworded anyway
  • ...twenty-nine of them, of which ten were of fifty guns.: not sure of the consistency of writing out numbers, particularly fifty, since "50-gun" is used earlier in the text.
  • Reworded

Construction

  • No issues

Disappearance

  • No issues, but I suggest having the main heading as Service, with Disappearance as a subheading for the paragraph starting "Having reached South America". I appreciate that this would be more of an editorial choice though, hence it is a suggestion only.
  • Done

other stuff

  • Sources look fine
  • Image tags OK
  • No dupe links

Only a few issues found, this looks to be in pretty good order otherwise. Placing on hold. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:38, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Zawed: Hi, thanks for the review. Have replied above. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 13:58, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Happy with these changes, so am passing this as GA as I believe that it meets the necessary criteria. Zawed (talk) 08:23, 23 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]