Talk:HMS Cato (1782)/GA1
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 08:50, 14 October 2022 (UTC)
I will review this one in the next few days. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:50, 14 October 2022 (UTC)
Design
- both of which were anomalous types: suggest "both of which were anomalous types of ships"
- Done
- the navy ordered...: shouldn't navy be capitalised?
- Reworded anyway
- ...twenty-nine of them, of which ten were of fifty guns.: not sure of the consistency of writing out numbers, particularly fifty, since "50-gun" is used earlier in the text.
- Reworded
Construction
- No issues
Disappearance
- No issues, but I suggest having the main heading as Service, with Disappearance as a subheading for the paragraph starting "Having reached South America". I appreciate that this would be more of an editorial choice though, hence it is a suggestion only.
- Done
other stuff
- Sources look fine
- Image tags OK
- No dupe links
Only a few issues found, this looks to be in pretty good order otherwise. Placing on hold. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:38, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
- @Zawed: Hi, thanks for the review. Have replied above. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 13:58, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
- Happy with these changes, so am passing this as GA as I believe that it meets the necessary criteria. Zawed (talk) 08:23, 23 October 2022 (UTC)