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It seemed to be an aberation to move this article from AfC to World’s 1st Breastfeeding Support Project Using Google Glass. There's no two sources here that agree on what this app trial was called. Even the two organisers, the Australian Breastfeeding Association and Small World Social fail to agree on what the trial was called. I've moved the article to something which (in my view) is more succinct and neutral.

In my view these trials seem to be a precursor to the development and release of a computer app and probably it will be better to merge this information with an article about the app, if and when it is released. Sionk (talk) 22:36, 12 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi Hastuer, You may not view women's health as an important issue and one that is note worthy, however many other people do. Perhaps focus your attention on deleting other entries that arent as important to so many millions of women and their babies around the world.

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Currently the page intro ends in a dangling sentence: "an informational portal to support women with breastfeeding."

Should this read: "breastfeeding children."?

or: "women who are breastfeeding."?

Ahlfi006 (talk) 03:22, 29 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]


Another error is found in:

"innovative application wearable technologies."

Suggestions include: "innovative application of wearable technology." or "innovative wearable technology application."

Ahlfi006 (talk) 03:31, 29 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]