Talk:Glass production in Licking County, Ohio

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I made edits to improve clarity and readability. I removed redundancy, condensed long sentences, and corrected grammar errors. Additionally, I added necessary commas and used parallel structure to clarify ideas. I also fixed some verb tense inconsistencies to ensure grammatical consistency throughout the article. NLBHvn (talk) 02:30, 12 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I made edits to improve grammar and change, or remove if necessary, subjective writing to properly adhere to Wikipedia's guidelines. I also capitalized the titles of the segments. Some sentences were redundant, so I condensed them down. I had to greatly change and move around the information in the Modern-Day Glassmaking segment: much of it was fluff or incredibly subjective, so I cut out as much of that language as possible and moved the information into more appropriate sections.--NeosHelios (talk) 05:54, 12 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]