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Failed Luftwaffe and Navy intervention
[edit]Should it be added in the "Sinking" section that one of the main reasons the British attack on Bismarck was successful was because the ships had been damaged just beyond the Luftwaffe's maximum range? \
Also, the fact the British thought that the plume of smoke in the distance as they were rescuing Bismarck's crew was from a U-Boat was partly because the German Navy actually had deployed U-Boats to rescue the Bismarck. But due to lack of speed couldn't make it? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dario DeCasseres (talk • contribs) 00.51, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
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At around 10:00, a shell from King George V penetrated the upper citadel belt and exploded in the ship's after canteen, killing Oels on the gun deck and about a hundred others.
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At around 10:00, a shell from King George V penetrated the upper citadel belt and exploded in the ship's aft canteen, killing Oels on the gun deck and about a hundred others.
"after canteen" to "aft canteen" 143.159.69.199 (talk) 07:22, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
Ship pronoun proposal
[edit]I suggest we use neuter pronouns (it) instead of feminine (she) for ships in this article. This is allowable under WP:SHIPPRONOUNS. The reasoning is that it's a compromise measure given the German use of masculine "he" for ships and widespread use of "he" elsewhere to refer to Bismarck. So doing so might head off future edit conflict. Fangz (talk) 18:46, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- Using "it" won't satisfy the Wheraboos, and I'm not inclined to "compromise" with them when their position is Nazi propaganda. Ships aren't masculine in German; "schiffe" is feminine, and they use the term "schwesterschiff", not "bruderschiff". It's also worth pointing out that the de.wiki article begins "Die Bismarck war ein Schlachtschiff... (emphasis mine). Lastly, the idea that Bismarck is referred to as "he" widely elsewhere seems a rather dubious proposition - I find exactly zero returns for battleship Bismarck "his wreck", while battleshi Bismarck "her wreck" returns quite a few. Parsecboy (talk) 19:09, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- Fair enough. Does wikipedia have an article discussing this? I don't mean internal wikipedia policy, rather the historical aspect. Fangz (talk) 19:38, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- Do you mean the grammatical gender of ships in general? Not that I’m aware of. Parsecboy (talk) 21:00, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- Well that's one thing but I think it would be good to discuss the specifics of this issue wrt WWII propaganda. I see some forum posts about Lindemann proposing this for Bismarck but maybe there's a good reference to be found. Fangz (talk) 14:34, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- Two points: we don't engage with Nazi propaganda anywhere else, I see no reason to here (especially since this is so trivial). And I've seen no reference to the idea in any legitimate source I've read, so we shouldn't cover it either, regardless of what nonsense is spread on forums. Parsecboy (talk) 15:20, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- Well that's one thing but I think it would be good to discuss the specifics of this issue wrt WWII propaganda. I see some forum posts about Lindemann proposing this for Bismarck but maybe there's a good reference to be found. Fangz (talk) 14:34, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- Do you mean the grammatical gender of ships in general? Not that I’m aware of. Parsecboy (talk) 21:00, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- Fair enough. Does wikipedia have an article discussing this? I don't mean internal wikipedia policy, rather the historical aspect. Fangz (talk) 19:38, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
Scuttling
[edit]Taken from the Bismarck article, in the "Sinking" section.
"Some near misses alongside the port side, and the fact that the ship was no longer able to fight back, caused Oels to decide at around 09:30 to scuttle Bismarck to prevent the ship being boarded by the British, and to allow the crew to abandon ship so as to reduce casualties [155] [156]"
The first reference given (page 28 of the "Marine forensics Analysis") gives no source for its assertion of Oels's "issuing the scuttle order at 9:30am", and does not contain ANY evidence to support the idea of crew concerns about "the ship being boarded by the British".
This is from "Battleship Bismarck: A survivor's story" the first edition copy Written by Baron Burkhard von Mullenheim-Rechberg, Bismarck's senior ranking survivor.
Page 211 "Our list to port had increased a bit while firing was going on" followed by "Around 9:30am gas and smoke began to drift through our station" This means that prior to 9:30am Bismarck was already flooding, not something that happens to a healthy seaworthy ship, in other words she was already starting to sink.
This next piece of evidence is taken from an interview conducted for the highly regarded weekly history journal "Purnell's history of the second world war" in the late 1960's with Gerhard Junack (Bismarck's only surviving engineering officer and the survivor who supposedly enacted the "scuttle order", which he only mentioned for the first time during the same interview in 1967). He stated that...
"Somewhere about 1015 hours, I received an order over the telephone from the Chief Engineer (Korvettenkapitän (Ing.) Walter Lehmann) to 'Prepare the ship for sinking.' That was the last order I received on the Bismarck. Soon after that, all transmission of orders collapsed." This also confirms the falsehood of the paragraph in the article.
Heading back to the account of Mullenheim-Rechberg, on Page 212 he states that (before 10:00am) "I was using all the telephone circuits and calling all over the place in an effort to find out as much as possible about the condition of the ship. I got only one answer. I reached the messenger in the damage control centre and asked "who has and where is the command of the ship? Are there new orders in effect?".... The man said he was in a great hurry. He told me that everyone had abandoned the damage control centre, adding that he was the last one in the room and had to get out... then he hung up".
This vain search for contact & information over the Bismarck's internal comms happened BEFORE 10:00am which throws some mild doubt on Junack's testimony where he says he was contacted by the chief engineer who supposedly gave him the "scuttle order" over the phone at 10:15am... Hmmmmm.
The reference numbered [156] states "Garzke, Dulin & Jurens 2019b, pp. 683, 866, 873."
I possess a 2019 copy of the afore referenced book, and it does NOT have pages 683, 866 and 879, as the book contains only 610 pages !!! So the reference supporting that paragraph is false.
As well as a physical copy of the book I also have a PDF version which enables a reader to search for specified words and phrases, and I can confirm there is NO reference ANYWHERE in the book regarding any concerns on behalf of Bismarck's crew about the potential for Bismarck to be "boarded by the British", there is also NO reference anywhere in Baron Burkhard von Mullenheim-Rechberg's book regarding that same concern about "board(ing) by the British".
If taken at face value these survivor testimonies show that there was at least a 45 minute gap between Bismarck starting to sink and the first mention of a "scuttle order" being given.
Anything else is just hurt German pride, bolstered by modern day delusional wehraboos. Germany was well known for trying to hide its national humiliations, such as when they scuttled their "grand fleet" at the end of WW1, like illogically saying "We lost.. but you didn't win", or a pathetic "You didn't beat us because we killed ourselves first" sort of idiocy.
The whole paragraph I quoted at the top of this post is complete nonsense, not worthy of a supposedly authoratative account of the Bismarck action, and is fit only for idiotic "Youtube " comments section talk. 92.16.42.113 (talk) 19:59, 16 November 2024 (UTC)
- A few points of order:
- Dulin et. al. - the authors of the paper you dismiss - are noted naval historians and/or marine archeologists. What you think of their paper is meaningless. This is also the cited source for the claim about concern over boarding, not the Garzke, Dulin, & Jurens book. I'm not quite sure how you think that, given they are clearly cited.
- The version of Garzke, Dulin, & Jurens is the eBook format, which apparently has different pagination. Perhaps, rather than claim the citation to be false, you actually crack open your hardcopy version and try to find the citations. If you're curious, the relevant pages are 416 and 437.
- On listing - I'm not sure what point you think you're making. You'll note that Bismarck already had a list from the Denmarck Strait action, and the article makes clear in the same paragraph with which you take issue that "Bismarck was also slowly sinking due to an increasing list that allowed water to enter the ship via damage to the main deck..."
- On the issue of the timing of the order to scuttle, you will note in your copy of Garzke, Dulin, & Jurens (on page 527), that Statz is the source for Oels giving orders to scuttle at 9:30.
- Your final statement is a quite apt description of the rest of your complaint. Parsecboy (talk) 20:42, 16 November 2024 (UTC)
- Before you saddle up your high horse, make sure of your OWN footing. You're mistaken when you say "I dismiss Garzke, Dulin, & Jurens" I do NO such thing, I instead dismiss the references made to a ficticious page in their well regarded book and their contribution to Cameron's survey, references which at no point makes ANY comment that supports the assertion of "boarding by the British" in the wiki article.
- The pages from Garzke, Dulin, & Jurens book (pages 683, 866 & 873)referred to in the article still bear no relevance to the assertion even when checked against the PDF version.
- Page 683 discusses "Admiral Tovey's decisions during the pursuit" on the 24th May
- Page 863 discusses the situation as Vian's 5 destroyers commence their action against Bismarck on the evening of the 26th May.
- Page 866 discusses the ongoing destroyer action through the early hours of 27th May.
- NOWHERE in those references either in the physical book or the PDF is there ANY supporting corroboration to the "boarding" nonsense.
- After reading both page 416 & 437 of the physical copy, I'd be happy for you to indulge me and point out EXACTLY where on those pages refers to any concerns regarding "boarding by the British"?
- Why is there no reference to the 1967 interview with Kapitänleutnant Gerhard Junack where he clearly states that "Somewhere about 1015 hours, I received an order over the telephone from the Chief Engineer (Korvettenkapitän (Ing.) Walter Lehmann) to 'Prepare the ship for sinking.' That was the last order I received on the Bismarck. Soon after that, all transmission of orders collapsed."? 92.16.42.113 (talk) 12:14, 17 November 2024 (UTC)
- Do you understand that you are conflating two references? The citation to the boarding concern is not from Garzke, Dulin, and Juren's book. If you can't follow citations, then we don't have much to discuss. Parsecboy (talk) 12:31, 17 November 2024 (UTC)
- There's no conflation whatsoever, I've stated that the supposed 9:30am "scuttling order" COMPLETELY ignores the fact that the man who EVERYONE agrees carried out the scuttling said he received the order at 10.15am !!!
- And the "boarding" reference is merely a unsubstantiated comment made by Cameron with NO source of his "information" supplied, I though you were against unsupported hearsay? 92.16.42.113 (talk) 15:55, 18 November 2024 (UTC)
- You state that: "NOWHERE in those references either in the physical book or the PDF is there ANY supporting corroboration to the "boarding" nonsense.", and then again state "After reading both page 416 & 437 of the physical copy, I'd be happy for you to indulge me and point out EXACTLY where on those pages refers to any concerns regarding "boarding by the British"?" - the book isn't where that claim is sourced. You are looking in Source A when the article clearly cites Source B.
- Why don't you call me when you decide to argue in good faith? Parsecboy (talk) 16:03, 18 November 2024 (UTC)
- You really do talk some nonsense. "call me when you decide to argue in good faith" I'm not sure you actualy know what that means, instead thinking it's a high handed put down.
- Where would a small mistake on my behalf (I'm not too big to say I now see where your "conflation" remark was coming from) be passed of as "bad faith" exactly? But the small confusion on my behalf apart, why not discuss the valid points I've made, instead of trying to deflect over small minded pettiness?
- 1. Where is Cameron's source for the "boarding" nonsense, as it's not mentioned in ANY of the survivor accounts I've read over the last 60 years? As it stands it's unsubstantiated hearsay.... anathema to your finely tuned wiki sensibilities.
- 2. Where does Junack's first hand testimony as to receiving the "scuttle order" at "around 10:15am" fit into your preciously curated wiki narrative?
- As an aside, I now remember a number of years ago, having another discussion with you about an entry I made into the wiki, regarding HMS Dorsetshire and her departure from Convoy SL-74, and the fact that on his way to intercept Bismarck, Capt BCS Martin addressed Dorsetshire's crew and informed them of his intention to interecpt Bismarck and announced that if necessary he was prepared to attempt to ram the battleship. In your apparently customary high handed manner you REPEATEDLY removed the comment, which I was told first hand by my father who was a crewmember onboard Dorsetshire at the time, as I could give no written source. Well I can now refer you to the bottom paragraph of page 774 of the PDF version of "Battleship Bismarck: A design and operational history" which confirms what you repeatedly removed from the wiki.
- Would "your highness" allow such a snippet of VERIFIED information to be inserted into YOUR Bismarck wiki page, especially as you're quite happy to allow unsubstantiated nonsense into the article? 92.16.42.113 (talk) 17:41, 20 November 2024 (UTC)
- Friend, repeatedly mischaracterizing the sourcing of this article, even after you've been told you're doing it, isn't a "small mistake". And you were doing it either deliberately (i.e., in bad faith) or because your mind is so closed that you weren't willing to hear that you were making that mistake (i.e., not exactly good faith argumentation either).
- To your substantive points:
- 1: I've already explained this, so I'll reproduce it here: "Dulin et. al. - the authors of the paper you dismiss - are noted naval historians and/or marine archeologists. What you think of their paper is meaningless."
- 2: There isn't any first hand testimony included in the article. I'm not sure why you think we should single out Junack.
- Ah, yes, very high-handed of me to demand sources that weren't forum posts. I'm terribly sorry for expecting you to do proper work. Parsecboy (talk) 17:56, 20 November 2024 (UTC)
- Do you understand that you are conflating two references? The citation to the boarding concern is not from Garzke, Dulin, and Juren's book. If you can't follow citations, then we don't have much to discuss. Parsecboy (talk) 12:31, 17 November 2024 (UTC)
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