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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:04, 19 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]


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  • "Curtis made " -> "He made..."
  • " title and the 1966–67 Second Division titles" delete that first "title".
  • Is there a list of Cov managers article which can be linked in the lead?
  • "the Kent village of Aylesham, in the Kent Coalfield close to Dover" infobox just says Dover, be consistent.
  • Interesting you go for "association football" in this para but not in the lead...
  • "Curtis made his first-team..." He
  • Our article calls it Football League Third Division South.
  • Newport is an AFC
  • Is "left-back" linkable to anything?
  • "did his best" in the game" no need for "in the game"
  • "the Football League Third Division South, and" now you get it, so this is overlinked once you fix the previous similar comment!
  • "lowest-ever league position of 91st " perhaps make this clear that this was 91st in the first four divisions....
  • "new Division Four" etc, wasn't it the "Fourth Division"?
  • " 1958–59" season link?
  • Could link captain.
  • "air-force team" could say "Royal Air Force team" and link as there's no link direct to RAF.
  • "as manager, a" you mentioned manager right at the top of this section.
  • "They following season" typo and link season?
  • "in 1965–66" season link.
  • Apply that comment hereafter...
  • "at Blackburn in" link. Were they not Rovers at the time??
  • Link relegation.
  • "and was not able to return " -> "and did not return"
  • link substitute.
  • "against Stoke the" City.
  • "it remains the highest for an outfield player" needs an "as of" which matches the ref.
  • " £30,000" inflate?
  • "He scored a goal in his" do you need "a goal"?
  • "third tier" I may have missed it but did you link English football league system somewhere?
  • "one more game. He retired from the game shortly afterwards" -> "one more game, retiring shortly afterwards"
  • "the flub facing" typo of the day award.
  • "which is As of 2021 the " there's a neat lc=yes or lc=on (can't remember) which turns As to as.
  • "Sillett became Coventry's sole manager from the 1987–88 season onwards, although with Sillett having" Sillett Sillett, repeat...
  • "FA Cup Final" as it's not a specific one, I would de-cap Final.
  • "on Saturday 17" day of the week not relevant.
  • BNA sources need url-access=subscription.
  • Fix up the spaced hyphens -> spaced en-dashes.
  • Page ranges need en-dash, not hyphen.
  • Ref 33 publisher/work?
    I've removed the whole thing. The picture at the Legends Lounge doesn't appear to be there any more now anyway, since Wasps have refurbed the place into a rugger-themed space.

That'll do for now, on hold dude. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:27, 19 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: I think I've looked at all your points. Cheers  — Amakuru (talk) 10:30, 20 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
As expected, this is good, i.e. good, so promoting. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 11:37, 20 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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