Talk:Future (song)/GA1

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 15:28, 23 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Didn't understand what you meant? Alex ^{reach me!} 21:23, 25 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

You took this from the reception portion, these are the words from various critics. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:13, 26 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Excuse me, @MarioSoulTruthFan:; I have corrected this last point (with Alex's permission of course); let me know if it works. Thank you both--Christian (talk) 15:36, 26 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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The image of Diplo seems unecessary, the caption is already on the secont paragraph of the article and there are already two images on this small article.
who served as → who was a
Regarding the genre of the songs the dancehall is according to Idolator is "dancehall-tinged", so the track is heavily influenced by it and not a genre. Gay Times also claims the same for the reggae beat, "Reggae-tinged", however the Guardian author says "Future is her go at pop’s next big trend, roots reggae", so change reggae to roots reggae + wikilik. Nevetherless, if you can find sources claiming the afomerementioned genres they can stay.
Due to preivous explanation "It is a roots reggae and hip hop song, heavily influenced by dancehall.[5][7][8]"
Plugged In setence remove per not being a reliable source as it bias towards social conservative and religious views

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darkness hangs heavy [on the album] [...] present even on the bobbing reggae of 'Future' → this would be better fit on the above section. It doesn't state if he liked or disliked the track, its just a descreption of the track.

Where is this?

@MarioSoulTruthFan: I removed it as I thought it wasn't relevant enough; it's already stated that it's a reggae song Alex ^{reach me!} 21:22, 25 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Entertainment Weekly and Financial Times → same as previous
Moreover, these three source add to the genre of the song. bobbing reggae and dancehall flavour → influence, with EW calling it a "dancehall jam". The Idolator review of Madame X also cails it " dancehall-lite", so I'm sure its influenced by dancehall
Writing for Gay Times, → positive review
sell the song → sell the track
On France's singles download chart, the song reached number 16, On the UK Singles Downloads Chart, the track reached number 33 → The track peaked at number 16 and 33, on the French Digital and UK Download charts, respectively.
the song debuted → the track debuted
Why not a mnetion of Euro Digital?
The image of Quavo should be in the beggining of the section.

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Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between the personnel and credits

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Use Template:Single chart for the UK Downloads, Scotland, Hungary, France and Euro Digital Songs entries.

The France Downloads link is dead, therefore it can't be replaced Alex ^{reach me!} 15:19, 25 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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There is no need for two external liks of audio, remove the Spotify one since you need an account.
Remove the lyrics per Template:MetroLyrics song

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You can now address the issues. On hold for seven days. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:24, 24 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Take a look. Alex ^{reach me!} 12:38, 25 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]