Talk:Frontier Nursing Service
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FNS Editing plan
[edit]Hello, Editors! I am going to edit this article for my Editing Project, and here's my editing plan I would like to share with you to see if you have any suggestions and comments:
1. The "History" block is hard to follow since the information is not presented in chronological order and some information in the last paragraphs is repeated. I want to rearrange the last paragraphs, add citations, since some parts of the text are direct quotes from the FNU website, and want to add subheadings to organize the information in this section.
2. Add visuals: I found the digitized copy of the Frontier Nursing Service Quarterly Bulletin, vol.V from December 1929 with the motto and purpose of FNS, so I want to make a screenshot of that page and add it to the article. I am also thinking about adding visuals from the FNU website since it would add to the completeness of the article.
3. To the "impact" section, I want to add some information on how many patients FNS helped during the year 1938 to 1939.
4. I'll also work on copyediting.
What do you think about my editing plan, and do you have any recommendations?. Do you think that reorganizing the "history" block will help with the readability? I aim for 10 substantive edits. All suggestions are welcome! Thank you. 2601:541:101:7DC0:AD20:C4F3:B235:DCF8 (talk) 19:50, 29 March 2023 (UTC)
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