Talk:From the Bottom of My Broken Heart/GA1
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Reviewer: CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 01:33, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- Remove "the"
- as the fifth and final single from ...Baby One More Time -> the album. You used the title already a few words ago
- for selling over 50,000 physical units of the single -> ? Platinum is 1 million
- setted Spears -> setted?
- the song on the 42nd Grammy Awards -> at the
- The whole thing Done - Sauloviegas (talk) 04:13, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
Background
[edit]- Again, try and tie in the sentences so it reads more fluently and flows better. Also, I feel there is more info you can add.
Composition
[edit]- Good, but try and expand a bit
- Hey, I've merged the two sections. They were merged before, I unmerged them because I thought there was enough info to do so. I've been searching for infos about the background and composition of the song since December, and I couldn't find anything else... Sorry... :( - Sauloviegas (talk) 04:13, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
Reception
[edit]- It didn't peak at 52, it debuted
- Done - Sauloviegas (talk) 04:13, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
Music video
[edit]- Was directed
- The video portrays Spears
- Fix up tense issues
- Done - Sauloviegas (talk) 04:13, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
Live performances
[edit]- Kitted?
- Was wearing. - Sauloviegas (talk) 04:13, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
- Enormous fans? NPOV
- Hand fans. - Sauloviegas (talk) 04:13, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
References
[edit]- 2 & 4 are linked twice
- Done - Sauloviegas (talk) 20:22, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
- 8 needs linking and publishers
- Done - Sauloviegas (talk) 20:22, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
- 9, #10, #11 need linking and publishers etc.
- Done - Sauloviegas (talk) 20:22, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
- 11 needs work
- Done - Sauloviegas (talk) 20:22, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
- 13 not reliable
- Archived from the original. - Sauloviegas (talk) 20:22, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
- 14 needs work
- Done - Sauloviegas (talk) 20:22, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
- 16 again linking
- Done - Sauloviegas (talk) 20:22, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
- 17 & #18 need linking, italics and publishers
- Done - Sauloviegas (talk) 20:22, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
- 20 linking
- Done - Sauloviegas (talk) 20:22, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
- 21 Youtube does not belong on Wikipedia
- Removed. - Sauloviegas (talk) 20:22, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
- 25 linking, publisher
- Done - Sauloviegas (talk) 20:22, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
- 30 needs some work
- Generated automatically by Wikipedia. Can't change it. - Sauloviegas (talk) 20:22, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
- Overall I feel this article as well is a bit rushed. Aside from the facts, there is no compelling or background info on the song. I feel there is more info you could add. Nice work though! :)--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 02:49, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
- Passing. Much better!--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 10:25, 13 March 2011 (UTC)