Talk:Free Woman/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: GagaNutella (talk · contribs) 03:01, 13 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GagaNutella

Remove the source from the infobox;
Add year of release for Chromatica;
"Free Woman" is a Eurohouse -> It is;
Is the word Inspired really capitalized?;
and Gaga's commercial for -> and her commercial;
Wikilink the first Lady Gaga appears;
Gaga discussed the -> she discussed;
2015 single "Love Is Free";
MusicOMH is not in italics;
MOS:OL: Billboard in the "Commercial performance" section;
Add a comma after Portugal;
Lady Gaga's weekly podcast -> Gaga's;
Talking about their collaboration with Gaga -> Talking about their collaboration;
"inspirational video" by Lady Gaga -> "inspirational video" by Gaga;
Ref 1: add trans-tile parameter and wl Pure Charts;
Ref 2: wl Billboard;
Ref 3: wl Chromatica;
Ref 8: Spotify is not in italics;
Ref 9: change ww.pinknews.co.uk to PinkNews and wl;
Ref 10: Insta is not in italics;
Ref 11: Tidal is not in italics;
CelebMix is not reliable, please find another source;
Ref 29: musicOMH is not in italics;
Ref 30: Insider.com to Insider and wl;
Ref 34: delete publisher parameter;
I think ref 39 is not working;
Refs 41 and 42: add trans-title;
Ref 45: iTunes it not in italics and wl;
On ref 46 use Twitter parameter;
I don't think EDM.com is reliable, try to find another one;
Ref 49: wl Billboard;
Ref 57: Allmusic is not in italics;
Ref 66: wl Recorded Music NZ;
Ref 70: wl Billboard.

I think that's it! Good luck. GagaNutella^talk 03:01, 13 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@GagaNutella: Thank you for the help. I've addressed most of your notes, except for a few:

"I think ref 39 is not working;"

It's a magazine, not an online link. I changed the template to 'cite magazine' from 'citation'. It's linked the same way at Lady Gaga discography.

"Refs 41 and 42: add trans-title;"

This template (Template:single chart) doesn't have a trans-title parameter. Are you sure it's necessary? I've seen these used in the same way in other good articles, e.g. Love Again (Dua Lipa song).

If it's a parameter then that's ok. GagaNutella^talk 02:49, 15 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

"CelebMix is not reliable, please find another source;"

I wasn't able to find any other source which mentions an EDM drop in the track. Should I just remove this part of the sentence?

It involves an EDM drop and a mid-tempo gospel groove from a keyboard line. → It involves a mid-tempo gospel groove from a keyboard line.

I'd say remove it. GagaNutella^talk 02:49, 15 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

(I'm removing the source from the infobox when everything else is done.) --Sricsi (talk) 13:09, 14 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I Support this GA. GagaNutella^talk 02:49, 15 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

All done. Thank you for the help! Sricsi (talk) 10:00, 15 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@GagaNutella: is there anything more to fix/add, or can you pass it? :) (WP:GAN/I#PASS) --Sricsi (talk) 20:26, 19 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Passing. Great body of work and well referenced! GagaNutella^talk 21:37, 19 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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